Talk:Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 06 Chapter 2: Difference between revisions
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This would make more sense to me. Can the translator check again? [[User:Xenocross|Xenocross]] ([[User talk:Xenocross|talk]]) 14:35, 7 May 2013 (CDT) | This would make more sense to me. Can the translator check again? [[User:Xenocross|Xenocross]] ([[User talk:Xenocross|talk]]) 14:35, 7 May 2013 (CDT) | ||
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No offense, but this needs a TLC badly along with an editor proficient in English. Its quality is understandable though, considering Setsuna isn't a native English speaker. | No offense, but this needs a TLC badly along with an editor proficient in English. Its quality is understandable though, considering Setsuna isn't a native English speaker. | ||
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I cant read the raws, so this is merely conjencture
"You bastard, we asked you to show us the way around, what are you thinking when you are running away?"
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"Because those people asked me to guide them to the ship, and I tried to take them out of the port."
This makes no sense in my head for the story, why would Olga show 3 adult man around?
But what if we swap the subject and object?
You bastard, you asked us to show us the way around, what are you thinking when you are running away?"
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"Because I asked those people to guide me to the ship, and they tried to take me out of the port.
This would make more sense to me. Can the translator check again? Xenocross (talk) 14:35, 7 May 2013 (CDT)
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No offense, but this needs a TLC badly along with an editor proficient in English. Its quality is understandable though, considering Setsuna isn't a native English speaker.