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This is a story when Tigre was a captive living in Leitmeritz.
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This is a story of when Tigre was a captive living in Leitmeritz.
   
“Let me hide here for a bit, I have been discovered trying to steal food.”
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“Let me hide here for a bit. I was discovered trying to steal food.”
   
Ellen who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre that was lying on the bed sleeping was astonished as he looked at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubt that this silver haired vanadis would probably comply. He was her captive, in the end he couldn’t resist anyway.
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Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end he couldn’t argue.
   
“......Ok ok, so there’s no one here huh?”
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“...Ok,ok. So, there’s no one here, huh?”
   
“No problem, I only need to wait for the clamor to die down......”
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“No problem. I only need to wait for the clamor to die down...”
   
After inspecting the room for a while, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.
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After inspecting the room a bit, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.
   
“A shamisen, where the hell does that come from?”
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“A shamisen, where did that come from?”
   
“From gamble, the other person didn’t have money, so he gave this to me instead.”
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“From gambling. The other person didn’t have money, so he gave this to me instead.”
   
Gambling with the soldiers he is close to is one of Tigre’s few entertainments.
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Gambling with the soldiers he's close with is one of Tigre’s few pastimes.
   
“Really, play it for me.”
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“Really? Play it for me.”
   
“Sorry, but I do not know how to play the instrument, can you teach me?”
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“Sorry, but I don't know how to play the instrument, can you teach me?”
   
Tigre snappingly replied. The image of a girl wielding a sword, this usually gives people the impression that she is unsuited for playing music. But Ellen smilingly walked over to the shamisen.
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Tigre snappishly replied. An image of a girl wielding a sword---this usually gives people the impression that she would be unsuited for playing music. However, Ellen walked over to the shamisen, smiling all the while.
   
“Well, I will demonstrate it for you then.”
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“I'll demonstrate it for you then.”
   
Picking up the shamisen, Ellen proceeded to sit down besides Tigre. Lightly stroking the shamisen with her fingertips.
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Picking up the shamisen, Ellen proceeded to sit down besides Tigre, lightly stroking the shamisen with her fingertips.
   
In the next moment, a vivid and lifelike melody resounded, overflowing from the gap between her fingers.
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In the next moment, a vivid and lifelike melody reverberated through the air, overflowing from the gap between her fingers.
   
“I have touched for several occasions already since shamisen is an instruments available to the commoners.
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"I'm used to this, since the shamisen is an instrument available to the commoners."
   
While fluently stroking the chords, Ellen displayed a pleasant smile, the tiny room was quickly filled with the song’s melodies. It was as if the silver haired girl was dancing.
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While expertly plucking the chords, Ellen displayed a pleasant smile and the tiny room was quickly filled with the song’s melody. It was as if the silver haired girl was dancing.
   
Considering her delighted expression, it would seem that this is her favourite’s song. A fleeting feelings struck Tigre as if overlapping with the notes. Such a calming music.
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Considering her delighted expression, it would seem that this is her favourite song. Fleeting feelings struck Tigre as if it overlapped with the notes. Such calming music, he thought.
   
Soon, the song ended, Ellen finally let out a melodious tone as she smiled triumphantly at Tigre, Tigre who just recovered his sense a bit later applauded.
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Soon, the song ended and Ellen let out a melodious tone as she smiled triumphantly at Tigre. Tigre, who was late to come back to his senses, applauded.
   
“This is really surprising, it is so good, well, very fascinating.”
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“That was really surprising. It was so good and, well, just very fascinating.”
   
Ellen having been praised, blushed, then she proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.
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Ellen, having been praised, blushed and proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.
   
“I, it is not that big of a deal. ——I only played a bit, I can play it again for you, how about it?”
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“I-it is not that big of a deal. ——I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, so how about it?”
   
Tigre smilingly nodded, Ellen picked up the shamisen again. Ellen herself, apparently seemed to be in high spirit. Reminiscing, she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years, long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.
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Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and its been long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.
   
Afterwards——Lim heard the silver haired vanadis played the shamisen, not long after that she reached the room the two of them were in.
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Afterwards——Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and not too soon did she reach the room the two of them were in.

Revision as of 10:12, 9 May 2013

This is a story of when Tigre was a captive living in Leitmeritz.

“Let me hide here for a bit. I was discovered trying to steal food.”

Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end he couldn’t argue.

“...Ok,ok. So, there’s no one here, huh?”

“No problem. I only need to wait for the clamor to die down...”

After inspecting the room a bit, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.

“A shamisen, where did that come from?”

“From gambling. The other person didn’t have money, so he gave this to me instead.”

Gambling with the soldiers he's close with is one of Tigre’s few pastimes.

“Really? Play it for me.”

“Sorry, but I don't know how to play the instrument, can you teach me?”

Tigre snappishly replied. An image of a girl wielding a sword---this usually gives people the impression that she would be unsuited for playing music. However, Ellen walked over to the shamisen, smiling all the while.

“I'll demonstrate it for you then.”

Picking up the shamisen, Ellen proceeded to sit down besides Tigre, lightly stroking the shamisen with her fingertips.

In the next moment, a vivid and lifelike melody reverberated through the air, overflowing from the gap between her fingers.

"I'm used to this, since the shamisen is an instrument available to the commoners."

While expertly plucking the chords, Ellen displayed a pleasant smile and the tiny room was quickly filled with the song’s melody. It was as if the silver haired girl was dancing.

Considering her delighted expression, it would seem that this is her favourite song. Fleeting feelings struck Tigre as if it overlapped with the notes. Such calming music, he thought.

Soon, the song ended and Ellen let out a melodious tone as she smiled triumphantly at Tigre. Tigre, who was late to come back to his senses, applauded.

“That was really surprising. It was so good and, well, just very fascinating.”

Ellen, having been praised, blushed and proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.

“I-it is not that big of a deal. ——I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, so how about it?”

Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and its been long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.

Afterwards——Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and not too soon did she reach the room the two of them were in.