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By the time Hisui left school, it was already night fall.
 
By the time Hisui left school, it was already night fall.
   
He should be jumping in joy because tomorrow is Saturday, but his footsteps are heavy and deep.
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He should be jumping for joy because tomorrow is Saturday, but his footsteps are heavy and deep.
   
The vampire suddenly enraged the ran off.
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The vampire suddenly enraged, ran off.
   
 
"So tired..."
 
"So tired..."
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It is already nightfall, so the parasol is useless-But it is still her private property.
 
It is already nightfall, so the parasol is useless-But it is still her private property.
   
Although it is perfectly fine to throw it away, But Kujou still carried it with him.
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Although it is perfectly fine to throw it away, Kujou still carried it with him.
   
It is not like he don't really want to return it to its owner, but she don't know where its owner is at.
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It is not like he didn't really want to return it to its owner, but he didn't know where its owner is.
   
 
Taking a wild guess, she is probably at his own home.
 
Taking a wild guess, she is probably at his own home.
   
Since the absurd fallout between the two of them, she shouldn't be satisfied living at his place anymore. But that coffin is still here, so she still have to make one more trip there.
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Since the absurd fallout between the two of them, she shouldn't be satisfied living at his place anymore. But that coffin is still there, so she still had to make one more trip there.
   
A vampire really don't need a coffin to sleep in, but it can block sunlight and restore spiritual power, so it is a critical item. High-level vampires have very specific requirements for their person coffin, and they always have their customized. Rushella's probably have hers like that as well.
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A vampire really doesn't need a coffin to sleep in, but it can block sunlight and restore spiritual power, so it is a critical item. High-level vampires have very specific requirements for their personal coffin, and they always have theirs customized. Rushella's probably had hers like that as well.
   
Theoretically, if she want to leave, she would definitely need to take that with her.
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Theoretically, if she wanted to leave, she would definitely need to take that with her.
   
 
Moreover, maybe the moving is already done, and by the time he get there she might be gone completely.
 
Moreover, maybe the moving is already done, and by the time he get there she might be gone completely.
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分别这么简单地便来临了 (such an simple solution?-Translator), Hisui smiled bitterly.
 
分别这么简单地便来临了 (such an simple solution?-Translator), Hisui smiled bitterly.
   
Why must I be the done to waste brain cell dealing with that noisy and conceited woman?
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Why must I be the one to waste brain cells dealing with that noisy and conceited woman?
   
 
Suddenly show up and bite me, then declare herself to be the mistress, completely arrogant vampire.
 
Suddenly show up and bite me, then declare herself to be the mistress, completely arrogant vampire.
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Something he totally forgot.
 
Something he totally forgot.
   
Something he want to forget, to be able to live a normal human's life.
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Something he wanted to forget, to be able to live a normal human's life.
   
 
"So troublesome.."
 
"So troublesome.."
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Did Rushella go to his house? He don't know.
 
Did Rushella go to his house? He don't know.
   
Did Rushella worry because she forgot her parasol? He don't know.
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Did Rushella worry because she forgot her parasol? He didn't know.
   
Even if he bring the Parasol to her, there probably will be a violent result.
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Even if he brought the Parasol to her, there probably will be a violent result.
   
Even though one can guess the result, but Kujou did not slowdown.
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Even though one can guess the result, Kujou did not slow down.
   
The road were wet and slippery, and he almost fell down several times, his vision was covered by fog, and the icy wetness slowly sapped his strength.
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The road was wet and slippery, and he almost fell down several times, his vision was covered by fog, and the icy wetness slowly sapped his strength.
   
 
But Kujou did not stop, and flew toward his home.
 
But Kujou did not stop, and flew toward his home.
   
Finally, his home was in sight. Kujou could only gasp for breathe, using last drop of his energy, opened the front gate and walk into the yard.
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Finally, his home was in sight. Kujou could only gasp for breath, using last drop of his energy, opened the front gate and walked into the yard.
   
 
"YOU......!"
 
"YOU......!"
   
Although Kujou hoped he was being an busybody, but Rushella's disastrous body lied before him.
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Although Kujou hoped he was being an busybody, but Rushella's disastrous body lay before him.
   
 
Vampire's weakness: Flowing Water. 而被其典型形态之一 A rain drenched girl, shivering, lying in front the entrance.
 
Vampire's weakness: Flowing Water. 而被其典型形态之一 A rain drenched girl, shivering, lying in front the entrance.
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Kujou shook her, but no response.
 
Kujou shook her, but no response.
   
Rushella's eyes were shut, he lips were purpose, and she shook uncontrollably, her body felt like a corpse, with temperature dropping, her snow white skin turned deathly pale.
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Rushella's eyes were shut, her lips were purpose,<--color?--> and she shook uncontrollably, her body felt like a corpse, with temperature dropping, her snow white skin turned deathly pale.
   
Although rainwater is a weakness, it is not a fatal one. But long exposure to a thunderstorm to lead to extensive damage.
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Although rainwater is a weakness, it is not a fatal one. But long exposure to a thunderstorm could lead to extensive damage.
   
 
Rushella's body now felt like a corpse. Her heartbeats were weak, and her physical body getting weaker by the second.
 
Rushella's body now felt like a corpse. Her heartbeats were weak, and her physical body getting weaker by the second.

Revision as of 23:13, 18 July 2013

By the time Hisui left school, it was already night fall.

He should be jumping for joy because tomorrow is Saturday, but his footsteps are heavy and deep.

The vampire suddenly enraged, ran off.

"So tired..."

The boy walked with a exhausted look, without any real sense of purpose or direction.

Hisui carried his bag and Rushella's discarded parasol.

It is already nightfall, so the parasol is useless-But it is still her private property.

Although it is perfectly fine to throw it away, Kujou still carried it with him.

It is not like he didn't really want to return it to its owner, but he didn't know where its owner is.

Taking a wild guess, she is probably at his own home.

Since the absurd fallout between the two of them, she shouldn't be satisfied living at his place anymore. But that coffin is still there, so she still had to make one more trip there.

A vampire really doesn't need a coffin to sleep in, but it can block sunlight and restore spiritual power, so it is a critical item. High-level vampires have very specific requirements for their personal coffin, and they always have theirs customized. Rushella's probably had hers like that as well.

Theoretically, if she wanted to leave, she would definitely need to take that with her.

Moreover, maybe the moving is already done, and by the time he get there she might be gone completely.

(Or, she might just be lying in ambush, ready to lead you to a BAD ENDING-Translator)

分别这么简单地便来临了 (such an simple solution?-Translator), Hisui smiled bitterly.

Why must I be the one to waste brain cells dealing with that noisy and conceited woman?

Suddenly show up and bite me, then declare herself to be the mistress, completely arrogant vampire.

Chase me to home...chase me to school....so much trouble.

And even blood drinking involve such a idiotic technique...most troublesomely, made him remember his body's special features.

Something he totally forgot.

Something he wanted to forget, to be able to live a normal human's life.

"So troublesome.."

Kujou whispered, then suddenly he felt a drop of icy water touching his face.

"Is it raining?"

The boy looked up to the sky, raindrops suddenly came down like a violent torrent.

The weather report did not mention this, so people around him began to flee as if chased by a natural disaster.

The amount of downpour was frightening, and the pedestrians begin to use magazines as cover, and hurried in the rain.

Hisui stared at them, then suddenly looked at the parasol in his hand.

Rushella has once said-It can be used as an ordinary Umbrella, and it can deflect unpredictable rainfall, a complete treasure. It is a Vampire's most common defense against natural flowing water.

But it is not in her hands right now.

Rainwater would never care where it lands, only to pour endlessly.

Returning to reality, Huisu found himself dashing in full speed.

Thinking carefully, this kind of worry is just being a busybody.

Is Rushella outside? He don't know.

Did Rushella go to his house? He don't know.

Did Rushella worry because she forgot her parasol? He didn't know.

Even if he brought the Parasol to her, there probably will be a violent result.

Even though one can guess the result, Kujou did not slow down.

The road was wet and slippery, and he almost fell down several times, his vision was covered by fog, and the icy wetness slowly sapped his strength.

But Kujou did not stop, and flew toward his home.

Finally, his home was in sight. Kujou could only gasp for breath, using last drop of his energy, opened the front gate and walked into the yard.

"YOU......!"

Although Kujou hoped he was being an busybody, but Rushella's disastrous body lay before him.

Vampire's weakness: Flowing Water. 而被其典型形态之一 A rain drenched girl, shivering, lying in front the entrance.

"HEY! Are you ok?"

Kujou shook her, but no response.

Rushella's eyes were shut, her lips were purpose,<--color?--> and she shook uncontrollably, her body felt like a corpse, with temperature dropping, her snow white skin turned deathly pale.

Although rainwater is a weakness, it is not a fatal one. But long exposure to a thunderstorm could lead to extensive damage.

Rushella's body now felt like a corpse. Her heartbeats were weak, and her physical body getting weaker by the second.

"What did you do?!"

Sudden thunderstorm weakened her body, without her parasol, and kept drenched until she fainted--one can guess what happened.

But, normally a vampire would never enter a rainstorm unprepared.

Because a vampire is highly sensitive to this weakness.

Kujou bit his tongue, and carried Rushella into the door.

He is also soaked, but the Vampire's body felt even colder, as if she turned into a block of ice.

Really felt---like carrying a corpse.

"Don't die please!"

These words made Rushella's hand move, But Kujou did not notice.

-Chapter 1/7-