Talk:Papa no Iu Koto o Kikinasai!:Volume 1 Chapter 5

I've made a minor change to chapter 5 (around the middle) when Sako, Yuuta and the sisters are playing video games, while Oda and Nimura are making dinner. Changed "...while we passed time before the soup was completed to play video games." into "...while we passed the time before the soup, we played video games." I think it make more sense like this. ^_^

Here are others alternative I thought: "...while waiting for the soup to be ready, we played video games.", "As the kitchen was rather small, we handed the work of cooking to Raika-san and Nimura. We played video games while waiting for the soup to be ready." The last one look better as it cut a rather long sentence into two. Tell me on the forum what would be best to use.