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Modified “…… What!? W- When you mention is…… She does seem to have a blonde sister.” into “…… What!? N-Now that you mention it…… She does seem to have a blonde sister.” a bit of change that I hope had much sense. | Modified “…… What!? W- When you mention is…… She does seem to have a blonde sister.” into “…… What!? N-Now that you mention it…… She does seem to have a blonde sister.” a bit of change that I hope had much sense. | ||
Also changed "Hina, who noticed that that she did not need to be scared anymore, poked her head out of Miu’s back and asked." into "Hina, who noticed that she did not need to be scared anymore, poked her head out of Miu’s back and asked." I removed a "that" that was just repetitive. | |||
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Latest revision as of 23:03, 17 September 2013
Modified “…… What!? W- When you mention is…… She does seem to have a blonde sister.” into “…… What!? N-Now that you mention it…… She does seem to have a blonde sister.” a bit of change that I hope had much sense.
Also changed "Hina, who noticed that that she did not need to be scared anymore, poked her head out of Miu’s back and asked." into "Hina, who noticed that she did not need to be scared anymore, poked her head out of Miu’s back and asked." I removed a "that" that was just repetitive.
-Grand Barbu