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"The fact that a person that does things by the book like Oba-san didn’t come[,] made me even more worried." | |||
Is it possible that there lacked a coma between the braket? | |||
" | Also i think it would be best translated this way: | ||
"The fact that a person as perfectionist as Oba-san didn’t come, made me even more worried." | |||
Sure it change the meaning but just a bit. And let the reader has enough breath to say that sentence. | |||
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In this line: "The fact that a person that does things by the book like Oba-san didn’t come[,] made me even more worried." Is it possible that there lacked a coma between the braket?
Also i think it would be best translated this way: "The fact that a person as perfectionist as Oba-san didn’t come, made me even more worried."
Sure it change the meaning but just a bit. And let the reader has enough breath to say that sentence.