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Noon, two days after leaving the academy…
 
Noon, two days after leaving the academy…
   
Saito and the rest have already reached the La Valliere territory. However, an entire night’s walk lay ahead of them until they will reach the Valliere house. Upon hearing the words “entire night’s walk”… Saito turned pale. He thought that this “territory” was nothing more than a courtyard.
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Saito and the rest reached the la Vallière territory. However, by the time they reached the la Vallière' house it would already be late at night. Upon hearing the words “late at night”... Saito turned pale. He realized that this “territory” was nothing more than a courtyard.
   
However, after a half of a day spent walking, he could not possibly understand how something this big could be a residence’s garden.
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However, after half a day spent traveling, he could not possibly understand how something this big could be a residence’s garden.
   
By Japanese standards, Louise’s territory could be called a small city. A city…never had Saito heard of somebody possessing so much land before. These upper nobles are truly intimidating.
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By Japanese standards, Louise’s territory could be called a small city. A city... Saito had never heard of somebody possessing so much land before. These Upper Nobles are truly intimidating.
   
 
Louise’s status as a noble was truly displayed once they entered her territory.
 
Louise’s status as a noble was truly displayed once they entered her territory.
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They decided to take a break at an inn…
 
They decided to take a break at an inn…
   
Once their carriages stopped, Siesta, who arrived just a bit earlier, quickly got out of her carriage. Because of having been trained as a maid, she went to go open the door for Louise.
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Once their carriages stopped, Siesta, who arrived just a bit earlier, quickly got out of her carriage. Having been trained as a maid, she went to open the coach's door for Louise.
   
“Uwaa, I can’t believe Siesta just did that…without any protests, thought Saito as he walked towards Louise’s carriage. But before he could get there, he was knocked down by a crowd of villagers running from the inn.
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“Uwaa, I can’t believe Siesta just did that... without any protesting”, thought Saito as he walked towards Louise’s carriage. But before he could get there, he was knocked down by a crowd of villagers running from the inn.
   
 
The villagers removed their hats in front of Louise, who had just stepped down.
 
The villagers removed their hats in front of Louise, who had just stepped down.
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“Miss Eleanor! Miss Louise!” they cried while deeply bowing down.
 
“Miss Eleanor! Miss Louise!” they cried while deeply bowing down.
   
Villagers even thought that Saito, who by now was implanted into the dirt, was a noble. They quickly helped him up apologizing for their terrible manners.
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The villagers thought that even Saito, who was now lying in the dirt, was a noble. They quickly helped him up apologizing for their terrible manners.
   
 
“No, I’m not a noble…” Saito nervously tried to explain.
 
“No, I’m not a noble…” Saito nervously tried to explain.
   
“Even so, you must be Miss Louise’s and Miss Eleanor’s attendant. And we cannot disrespect that.”
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“Even so, you must be Miss Louise’s or Miss Eleonore’s attendant. And we cannot disrespect that.”
   
 
Plainly looking farmers said while nodding.
 
Plainly looking farmers said while nodding.
   
They went on saying things such as “Let me carry your sword for you,” and “It must have been tiring journey to get here huh?” as they treated Saito with the utmost kindness.
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They went on saying things such as “Let me carry your sword for you,” and “It must have been a tiring journey to get here huh?” as they treated Saito with the utmost kindness.
   
 
“We will be resting here for a moment. Please inform the family of our arrival,” commanded Eleanor.
 
“We will be resting here for a moment. Please inform the family of our arrival,” commanded Eleanor.
   
A young boy quickly rode off on his horse to report the news.
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A young boy quickly jumped onto a horse and rode off in order to report.
   
They walked into the inn. Once Eleanor and Louise approached the table, chairs were immediately pulled out for them to sit on. The two sat down as if it were second nature. Saito tried to sit next to them only to be given a demeaning glare by Eleanor.
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They walked into the inn. Once Eleonore and Louise approached the table, chairs were immediately pulled out for them to sit on. The two sat down as if it were second nature. Saito tried to sit next to them only to be given a demeaning glare by Eleanor.
   
 
“Saito-san! Saito-san!”
 
“Saito-san! Saito-san!”
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Hearing Siesta call, Saito turned around.
 
Hearing Siesta call, Saito turned around.
   
“Commoners are not permitted to sit at the same tables as nobles.”
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“Commoners are not permitted to sit on the same tables as nobles.”
   
This reminded Saito. Recently he had been sitting next to Louise without worrying. Yet this was a strange thing to do in this world after all. Actually, Louise made Saito sit on the floor at first too.
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That reminded Saito. Recently he had been sitting next to Louise without worrying. Yet this was a strange thing to do in this world after all. Actually, Louise made Saito sit on the floor at first too.
   
Louise opened her mouth to say something but was cut off by a glare from Eleanor. Louise could do nothing but sit in her chair like a good girl. Saito started with wide-eyes – it was a first time he saw Louise in such state. She really looked naturally obedient to her older sister. However…it must be a really scary elder sister… to make Louise look so weak.
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Louise opened her mouth to say something but was cut off by a glare from Eleonore. Louise could do nothing but sit in her chair like a good girl. Saito stared wide-eyed – it was the first time he saw Louise in such a state. She really looked naturally obedient in front of her older sister. However... it must be a really scary elder sister... to make Louise look so weak.
   
“Oh how Louise has grown! She’s growing more and more beautiful!” Villagers continued the chatter.
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“Oh how Louise has grown!"
   
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"She’s growing more and more beautiful!”
“It seems Miss Eleanor has already been engaged, right?” someone muttered
 
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The villagers were chattering around them.
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“It seems Miss Eleanor has been engaged, right?” someone muttered.
   
 
“SHHH! Don’t talk about that!” came the scolding.
 
“SHHH! Don’t talk about that!” came the scolding.
   
Eleanor’s eyebrows started to twitch and her expression darkened. The atmosphere in the inn took a plunge. Apparently, speaking of Eleanor’s engagement was definitely something to be avoided…
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Eleonore’s eyebrows started to twitch and her expression darkened. The atmosphere in the inn took a plunge. Apparently, speaking of Eleonore’s engagement was definitely something to be avoided…
   
The commoners, feeling the murderous intent coming from Eleanor, didn’t dare speak another word. Saito and Siesta exchanged the looks with each other. Then Siesta squeezed herself against Saito. She was afraid.
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The commoners, feeling the murderous intent coming from Eleanor, didn’t dare speak another word. Saito and Siesta exchanged glances. Then Siesta quietly got close to Saito and grasped his hand. She was afraid.
   
 
Not noticing the change in her elder sister, Louise spoke.
 
Not noticing the change in her elder sister, Louise spoke.
   
“Eleanor. Eleanor nii-sama...”
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“Eleonore. Eleonore nee-sama...”
   
 
“What…”
 
“What…”
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The face of every commoner fell, and a deep sigh escaped them.
 
The face of every commoner fell, and a deep sigh escaped them.
Louise had completely misread the atmosphere once again. All of a sudden, Eleanor’s eyebrows shot up as she pinched Louise’s cheek.
 
   
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Louise had completely misread the atmosphere once again. All of a sudden, Eleonore’s eyebrows shot up as she pinched Louise’s cheek.
“It hwwuuuurrtsss!! Waaahhhhh! Nii-shammaaa!! Whhyy?! It hwurts it hwurts it hwurts!!!”
 
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“It hwwuuuurrtsss!! Waaahhhhh! Nee-shammaaa!! Whhyy?! It hwurts it hwurts it hwurts!!!”
   
 
“You don’t know? You speak of it even though you know you shouldn’t!”
 
“You don’t know? You speak of it even though you know you shouldn’t!”
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“W-why?”
 
“W-why?”
   
“Who knows? Why don’t you ask earl Burgandi? He said something about reaching his limit. I can’t understand why.”
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“Who knows? Why don’t you ask Earl Burgandi? He said something about reaching his limit. I can’t understand why.”
   
Saito completely sympathized with the earl Burgandi. Yes. Anybody who listened to her would soon reach their “limit”. Eleanor was simply a much more fierce and abusive Louise. Earl must have thought he didn’t have the stamina.
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Saito completely sympathized with that Earl Burgandi. Yes. Anybody who listened to her would soon reach their “limit”. Eleonore was much more fierce and abusive than Louise. The Earl must have thought he didn’t have the stamina.
   
In the end, unhappy with the marriage cancellation, Eleanor just vented all of her anger on Louise…
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In the end, unhappy with the marriage cancellation, Eleonore just vented all of her anger on Louise…
   
 
And so, the preaching started. She scolded Louise for blowing the roof of the carriage. Louise’s stretched cheek became angry red and swollen by then. Naturally, Saito felt sorry for Louise.
 
And so, the preaching started. She scolded Louise for blowing the roof of the carriage. Louise’s stretched cheek became angry red and swollen by then. Naturally, Saito felt sorry for Louise.
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However, this reprimand didn’t last very long because suddenly the door opened and a flow of pink blew in.
 
However, this reprimand didn’t last very long because suddenly the door opened and a flow of pink blew in.
   
The woman was wearing an elegant dress around her slim waist and a wide rimmed hat with a feather on top. Under the hat was a flow of silky pink blond hair – exactly the same as Louise’s.
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A girl, wearing an elegant dress around her slim waist and a wide rimmed hat with a feather on top, had entered. Under the hat was a flow of silky pink blond hair – exactly the same as Louise’s.
   
 
Surprisingly, a lovely face popped up from under the hat.
 
Surprisingly, a lovely face popped up from under the hat.
   
Although from the first look it was obvious that she was older, she looked very cute. Such beautiful face was beyond the description. Her eye color and the way they sparkled was the same as Louise’s as well. Noticing Eleanor, the woman stared with wide eyes.
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Although from the first look it was obvious that she was older, she looked very cute. Such a beautiful face was beyond description. Her eye color and the way her eyes sparkled was the same as Louise’s as well. Noticing Eleonore, the girl stared with wide eyes.
   
“Ah! I’m so glad I noticed the strange carriage outside and came over here to take a look. I didn’t think I would meet you! Eleanor nii-sama! You’re back?”
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“Ah! I’m so glad I noticed the strange carriage outside and came over here to take a look. I didn’t think I would meet you! Eleonore nee-sama! You’re back?”
   
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“Cattle...ya...” Eleonore muttered.
“Cattle…ya…” muttered Eleanor.
 
   
Noticing a sudden guest, Louise looked up. Seeing Louise, Cattleya’s face radiated with happiness which was mirrored on Louise’s face was as well.
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Noticing the sudden guest, Louise looked up. Seeing Louise, Cattleya’s face radiated with happiness which was mirrored on Louise’s face as well.
   
“Little sister!”
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“Big sister!”
   
 
“Louise! No way! You are not my chibi Louise anymore! You came back as well!”
 
“Louise! No way! You are not my chibi Louise anymore! You came back as well!”
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Louise stood up and leashed herself into Cattleya's chest.
 
Louise stood up and leashed herself into Cattleya's chest.
   
“It’s been so long little sister!!”
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“It’s been so long Big sister!!”
   
 
Unable to control their excitement, the two hugged with a squeal.
 
Unable to control their excitement, the two hugged with a squeal.
   
Seems like, Cattleya was Louise’s sister. She had the same hair color, the same eye color – it was like looking at Louise. However, Cattleya’s face seemed to have a more calm and placid look than Louise’s. This aura of complete calmness and tenderness coming from Cattleya, made Saito’s heart race.
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Seems like Cattleya was Louise’s sister. She had the same hair color, the same eye color – it was like looking at Louise. However, Cattleya’s face seemed to have a more calm and placid look than Louise’s. This aura of complete calmness and tenderness coming from Cattleya made Saito’s heart race.
   
 
She was like a matured Louise, with added gentleness. Besides, her beautiful figure and breasts well matched Saito’s taste.
 
She was like a matured Louise, with added gentleness. Besides, her beautiful figure and breasts well matched Saito’s taste.
   
Cattleya, mouth half opened, finally noticed Saito.
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Cattleya's mouth half opened as she finally noticed Saito.
   
 
“Ah, ah, ah , ahah!”
 
“Ah, ah, ah , ahah!”
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Cattleya began to gently stroke Saito’s face. Saito almost fainted from these sensations.
 
Cattleya began to gently stroke Saito’s face. Saito almost fainted from these sensations.
   
“You…are Louise’s lover right?”
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“You... are Louise’s lover, right?”
   
 
“Huh?!”
 
“Huh?!”
   
Siesta’s, who was standing right next to Saito, eyes suddenly turned cold. She stomped down on his foot. Hard. Saito jumped up.
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Siesta's, who was standing right next to Saito, eyes suddenly turned cold. She stomped down on his foot. Hard. Saito jumped up.
   
Louise’s blushed furiously.
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Louise blushed furiously.
   
 
“He’s just my familiar! Not my lover!”
 
“He’s just my familiar! Not my lover!”
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Everybody got onto Cattleya’s chariot for the remainder of the ride to the La Valliere household. Eleanor showed obvious discontent of having to sit with a commoner and a familiar. But when Cattleya jokingly said - “The more the merrier right?” Eleanor, though still not uttering a single word, reluctantly consented.
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Everybody got onto Cattleya’s chariot for the remainder of the ride to the La Valliere household. Eleonore showed obvious discontent of having to sit with a commoner and a familiar. But when Cattleya jokingly said - “The more the merrier right?” Eleonore, though still not uttering a single word, reluctantly consented.
   
However...Saito and the rest weren’t the only passengers in the large carriage.
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However... Saito and the rest weren’t the only passengers in the large carriage.

Revision as of 14:50, 22 July 2008

Chapter Two: Cattleya

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Noon, two days after leaving the academy…

Saito and the rest reached the la Vallière territory. However, by the time they reached the la Vallière' house it would already be late at night. Upon hearing the words “late at night”... Saito turned pale. He realized that this “territory” was nothing more than a courtyard.

However, after half a day spent traveling, he could not possibly understand how something this big could be a residence’s garden.

By Japanese standards, Louise’s territory could be called a small city. A city... Saito had never heard of somebody possessing so much land before. These Upper Nobles are truly intimidating.

Louise’s status as a noble was truly displayed once they entered her territory.

They decided to take a break at an inn…

Once their carriages stopped, Siesta, who arrived just a bit earlier, quickly got out of her carriage. Having been trained as a maid, she went to open the coach's door for Louise.

“Uwaa, I can’t believe Siesta just did that... without any protesting”, thought Saito as he walked towards Louise’s carriage. But before he could get there, he was knocked down by a crowd of villagers running from the inn.

The villagers removed their hats in front of Louise, who had just stepped down.

“Miss Eleanor! Miss Louise!” they cried while deeply bowing down.

The villagers thought that even Saito, who was now lying in the dirt, was a noble. They quickly helped him up apologizing for their terrible manners.

“No, I’m not a noble…” Saito nervously tried to explain.

“Even so, you must be Miss Louise’s or Miss Eleonore’s attendant. And we cannot disrespect that.”

Plainly looking farmers said while nodding.

They went on saying things such as “Let me carry your sword for you,” and “It must have been a tiring journey to get here huh?” as they treated Saito with the utmost kindness.

“We will be resting here for a moment. Please inform the family of our arrival,” commanded Eleanor.

A young boy quickly jumped onto a horse and rode off in order to report.

They walked into the inn. Once Eleonore and Louise approached the table, chairs were immediately pulled out for them to sit on. The two sat down as if it were second nature. Saito tried to sit next to them only to be given a demeaning glare by Eleanor.

“Saito-san! Saito-san!”

Hearing Siesta call, Saito turned around.

“Commoners are not permitted to sit on the same tables as nobles.”

That reminded Saito. Recently he had been sitting next to Louise without worrying. Yet this was a strange thing to do in this world after all. Actually, Louise made Saito sit on the floor at first too.

Louise opened her mouth to say something but was cut off by a glare from Eleonore. Louise could do nothing but sit in her chair like a good girl. Saito stared wide-eyed – it was the first time he saw Louise in such a state. She really looked naturally obedient in front of her older sister. However... it must be a really scary elder sister... to make Louise look so weak.

“Oh how Louise has grown!"

"She’s growing more and more beautiful!”

The villagers were chattering around them.

“It seems Miss Eleanor has been engaged, right?” someone muttered.

“SHHH! Don’t talk about that!” came the scolding.

Eleonore’s eyebrows started to twitch and her expression darkened. The atmosphere in the inn took a plunge. Apparently, speaking of Eleonore’s engagement was definitely something to be avoided…

The commoners, feeling the murderous intent coming from Eleanor, didn’t dare speak another word. Saito and Siesta exchanged glances. Then Siesta quietly got close to Saito and grasped his hand. She was afraid.

Not noticing the change in her elder sister, Louise spoke.

“Eleonore. Eleonore nee-sama...”

“What…”

“Congratulations on your engagement!”

The face of every commoner fell, and a deep sigh escaped them.

Louise had completely misread the atmosphere once again. All of a sudden, Eleonore’s eyebrows shot up as she pinched Louise’s cheek.

“It hwwuuuurrtsss!! Waaahhhhh! Nee-shammaaa!! Whhyy?! It hwurts it hwurts it hwurts!!!”

“You don’t know? You speak of it even though you know you shouldn’t!”

“I won’t whoh wah ur alking awout!!”

“The engagement has been canceled!! C-A-N-C-E-L-E-D!”

“W-why?”

“Who knows? Why don’t you ask Earl Burgandi? He said something about reaching his limit. I can’t understand why.”

Saito completely sympathized with that Earl Burgandi. Yes. Anybody who listened to her would soon reach their “limit”. Eleonore was much more fierce and abusive than Louise. The Earl must have thought he didn’t have the stamina.

In the end, unhappy with the marriage cancellation, Eleonore just vented all of her anger on Louise…

And so, the preaching started. She scolded Louise for blowing the roof of the carriage. Louise’s stretched cheek became angry red and swollen by then. Naturally, Saito felt sorry for Louise.

However, this reprimand didn’t last very long because suddenly the door opened and a flow of pink blew in.

A girl, wearing an elegant dress around her slim waist and a wide rimmed hat with a feather on top, had entered. Under the hat was a flow of silky pink blond hair – exactly the same as Louise’s.

Surprisingly, a lovely face popped up from under the hat.

Although from the first look it was obvious that she was older, she looked very cute. Such a beautiful face was beyond description. Her eye color and the way her eyes sparkled was the same as Louise’s as well. Noticing Eleonore, the girl stared with wide eyes.

“Ah! I’m so glad I noticed the strange carriage outside and came over here to take a look. I didn’t think I would meet you! Eleonore nee-sama! You’re back?”

“Cattle...ya...” Eleonore muttered.

Noticing the sudden guest, Louise looked up. Seeing Louise, Cattleya’s face radiated with happiness which was mirrored on Louise’s face as well.

“Big sister!”

“Louise! No way! You are not my chibi Louise anymore! You came back as well!”

Louise stood up and leashed herself into Cattleya's chest.

“It’s been so long Big sister!!”

Unable to control their excitement, the two hugged with a squeal.

Seems like Cattleya was Louise’s sister. She had the same hair color, the same eye color – it was like looking at Louise. However, Cattleya’s face seemed to have a more calm and placid look than Louise’s. This aura of complete calmness and tenderness coming from Cattleya made Saito’s heart race.

She was like a matured Louise, with added gentleness. Besides, her beautiful figure and breasts well matched Saito’s taste.

Cattleya's mouth half opened as she finally noticed Saito.

“Ah, ah, ah , ahah!”

While Saito was wondering what this ‘Ah’ might mean, Cattleya approached him and gazed at his face.

“W-w-what’s wrong?” Saito asked nervously.

Cattleya began to gently stroke Saito’s face. Saito almost fainted from these sensations.

“You... are Louise’s lover, right?”

“Huh?!”

Siesta's, who was standing right next to Saito, eyes suddenly turned cold. She stomped down on his foot. Hard. Saito jumped up.

Louise blushed furiously.

“He’s just my familiar! Not my lover!”

“Ah, is that so?”

Cattleya giggled and tilted her head with a sweet smile.

“I’m sorry, I got it wrong. Don’t worry about it.”


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Everybody got onto Cattleya’s chariot for the remainder of the ride to the La Valliere household. Eleonore showed obvious discontent of having to sit with a commoner and a familiar. But when Cattleya jokingly said - “The more the merrier right?” Eleonore, though still not uttering a single word, reluctantly consented.

However... Saito and the rest weren’t the only passengers in the large carriage.