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Revision as of 15:53, 11 June 2014
Setsuna, I'm going to try and point this out again and if you're adamant about it then I'll overlook it in the future but "floated a smile" sounds weird, why not just "smiled" or "gave a smile". Also "drop-out" soldiers sounds like deserting soldiers to me. Kuratatsu (talk) 10:53, 11 June 2014 (CDT)