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| − | Hi there, I just joined after my IP was frozen for trying to improve the Part 2 to Volume 9 Chapter 1's readability. I am unsure about how to resolve that as I lost the page. Anyways, I understand that there is need for translating but I also thought grammar and flow was important for reader enjoyment. I understand there are certain rules, so I figured at the very least I should display the edit so my work wasn't wasted: |
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| − | The young girl was in the clouds and the buildings and trees looked tiny. |
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| − | "Eh!!?" |
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| − | The intense sensation in the stomach of a slow free-falling. |
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| − | 'Is this a dream?' |
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| − | The suffocating heights making it difficult to breathe. |
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| − | The thin girl's body piercing through the moist clouds. The smells and tastes. |
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| − | 'I was just…' |
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| − | And then terror. |
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| − | Her entire body was telling her that this wasn't a dream. |
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| − | "Hiii~!!!" |
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| − | The young girl heard a scream escaping her throat and felt her eye's tearing. |
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| − | The scream promoted the fact that this sensation was reality. |
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| − | She didn't know how. |
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| − | But, she was in the sky. Falling. |
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| − | 'If I don't do something.' |
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| − | 'I'm going to die' |
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| − | Die. |
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| − | Without a doubt die. |
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| − | No matter how young the young girl is, she clearly understood the fact that she would die if she fell from such a height. |
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| − | 'I don't want to die!' |
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| − | She used all of her magic power. |
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| − | She knew that the ground was rapidly expanding in focus. |
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| − | The young girl raised the wind. |
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| − | Aimed directly below herself in order to fall onto it. |
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| − | She thought that her velocity would fall a bit. |
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| − | However, she quickly returned to her previous velocity. |
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| − | Wind was no good. |
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| − | What would be good to do at this kind of time? |
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| − | What did the young boy say? |
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| − | Remember, remember. |
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| − | Didn't the young boy say anything? |
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| − | What to do at a time when you're falling from a high place… |
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| − | "Soften the impact," he said in a calm voice. |
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| − | 'Soften?' |
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| − | “That's right. Engulf yourself in something soft.” |
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| − | However, exactly how soft? |
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| − | What would it be good to create? |
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| − | I don't know, I don't know, I don't know! |
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| − | She formed water clouds, spun upward wind currents, layered earth sheets, controlled fire. |
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| − | 'Slow down~...!' |
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| − | She did everything she could in a frenzy. |
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| − | But... she crashed. |
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| − | She felt her entire body submersed into the ground in a crater. |
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| − | 'Am I alive?' |
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| − | Her body covered in moderate cuts, bruises, dirt and grass clumping to her clammy skin, unbearable pain in both of her legs. |
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| − | It was a miserable state, her beaten up again, but the young girl survived. |
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| − | She laid there for a few moments, looking up to where she just was... |
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| − | But... somehow I softened the crash (as Rudi once told me) ... or. |
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| − | With only fractures, she survived a fall from a fatally high altitude... |
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| − | But, she felt like sharp needles stabbing into her legs. |
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| − | “Ugo . . . aaa!" |
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| − | In plain sight, a monster stood there. |
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| − | It looked like a huge wild boar... but it was walking on two legs and had four arms. <ref> Sounds like a pretty crazy boar, but ni soku hoko, that is walking on two legs right? </ref> |
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| − | The young girl heard about this monster. |
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| − | She was told by her father if she were to ever encounter it," Absolutely never get close. Without letting out a sound... wait for it to pass," |
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| − | "If you're noticed by it then use magic to escape as fast as you can." |
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| − | It was an opponent where she was told to do that. |
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| − | Terminate Boar. |
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| − | The young girl had many things she did not know, but she did know that the Terminate Boar was rarely seen. |
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| − | It was said they come out from the forest and would attack with an E rank monster, the Assault Dog, accompanying it. |
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| − | Locally, it is the most dangerous monster in Asura. |
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| − | Unusual for the peaceful Asura Kingdom, it was a monster worthy of C rank. |
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| − | The danger of it rises up from C rank to B rank if it is accompanied by Assault Dogs. |
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| − | That is most certainly the Terminate Boar. |
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| − | "Kyaaa~!" |
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| − | Frantically, the young girl screamed and frantically swelled up magic towards the menacing Terminate Boar. |
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| − | Intermediate Magic, [Icicle Breaker]. |
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| − | She wasn't holding back at all... Full Power. |
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| − | She was striking it with her strongest magic from the start stretching her utmost limits. |
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| − | It was a direct hit. |
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| − | The Terminate Boar froze two layers thick, fell next to her, shattered, and frozen shards scattered near her. |
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| − | "Ha . . . ha . . . agu!!" |
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| − | After trying to stand up in a breath, she realized that both of her leg's bones were practically shattered too. |
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| − | The young girl used healing magic and swiftly healed them. |
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| − | Ever since she assisted at the cleric's office in the healing of people, healing magic was a strong point of hers. |
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| − | But, it wasn't as if she was used to this level of severe, sudden pain. |
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| − | She bitterly used the magic with a tear-stained face. |
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| − | " . . . Ha . . . ha." |
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| − | Standing up. Shortness of breath. |
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| − | An intense headache started up. |
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| − | Dizziness. Her consciousness was warping and she felt faint. |
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| − | Later on, the young girl realized she was out of magic power. |
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| − | Suppressing the free-falling entry and even defeating a fearsome monster with magic. |
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| − | Not any type of magic, all of it was done without restraint using her greatest magic. |
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| − | Which is why, the young girl's magic power was exhausted. |
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| − | "A...are we saved? Y...you, where did you appear from? What is your name?" |
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| − | She heard a voice from behind her. |
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| − | With her head throbbing and her vision hazy, the young girl turned her attention to this voice. |
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| − | There was a... girl? |
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| − | With golden hair... and ... a beautiful face that almost gives the impression it is transparent... |
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| − | It was a girl wearing a pure white one piece with detailed embroidery... it seemed the materials were 1,000 times more expensive than what she received for her birthday. |
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| − | On the angelic girl's side, leaned a boy whose arm was injured and was leaning against a tree. And next to this boy, a man was... It seemed like his robe was crimson red and wet with blood. Yes, the man was soaked in . . . blood. |
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| − | "Sylphiette . . . ” |
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| − | The young girl answered and fainted. |
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| − | This is how Sylphy encountered Asura Kingdom, Second Princess Ariel Anemoi Asura. |
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| − | <noinclude> |
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