Difference between revisions of "Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume2 Chapter3"
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Yup, you're right. I'll change it. -[[User:SlashZero|SlashZero]] 00:05, 30 June 2006 (PDT) |
Yup, you're right. I'll change it. -[[User:SlashZero|SlashZero]] 00:05, 30 June 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I then turned my sight towards Nagato, who was sucking her soda hardly with her straw. - This seems a bit alkward, but I dont know how to change it |
+ | I then turned my sight towards Nagato, who was sucking her soda hardly with her straw. - This seems a bit alkward, but I dont know how to change it [Ano Reader] 8:25pm EST 07, July 2006 |
Revision as of 02:26, 10 July 2006
References & Translators Notes
Editors' Notes
"Haruhi had Asahina-san and Nagato stood three meters apart facing each other" ... Wouldn't it be "Haruhi had Asahina-san and Nagato stand three meters apart facing each other", as "stood" could really only work if haruhi wasn't telling them (or guiding them) to be a set distance apart?
Yup, you're right. I'll change it. -SlashZero 00:05, 30 June 2006 (PDT)
I then turned my sight towards Nagato, who was sucking her soda hardly with her straw. - This seems a bit alkward, but I dont know how to change it [Ano Reader] 8:25pm EST 07, July 2006
