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*page0|&f.scripttitle
 
*page0|&f.scripttitle
"Saber!!!"
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"Saber[line4]!!!"
 
Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover.
 
Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover.
 
*page1|
 
*page1|
"Hey, hold on!"
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"Hey, hold on[line4]!"
 
I run at full speed towards Saber.
 
I run at full speed towards Saber.
"Shirou?"
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"Shirou[line4]?"
 
She looks dumbfounded.
 
She looks dumbfounded.
 
Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker.
 
Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker.
 
*page2|
 
*page2|
I can make it!
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I can make it[line4]!
 
I can feel the danger coming up behind me.
 
I can feel the danger coming up behind me.
 
"W-Why did you come out...!?"
 
"W-Why did you come out...!?"
I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm!
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I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm[line4]!
 
*page3|
 
*page3|
 
"Are you insane, Master...!?"
 
"Are you insane, Master...!?"
"We'll talk later! Just come this way"
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"We'll talk later! Just come this way[line4]"
 
I grab Saber in my arms and jump away.
 
I grab Saber in my arms and jump away.
 
*page4|
 
*page4|
The "arrow" is released.
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[line4]The "arrow" is released.
 
Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far.
 
Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far.
 
The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking.
 
The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking.
 
But at that moment...
 
But at that moment...
 
*page5|
 
*page5|
""
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"[wacky len=15]"
The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might
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The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might[line4]
 
*page6|
 
*page6|
In that instant...
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[line4]In that instant...
 
All sound is lost.
 
All sound is lost.
 
*page7|
 
*page7|
"!"
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"[line8]!"
 
I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself.
 
I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself.
 
Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything.
 
Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything.
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I manage to survive the destruction.
 
I manage to survive the destruction.
 
*page9|
 
*page9|
"Wha"
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"Wha[line4]"
 
Saber is staring in astonishment.
 
Saber is staring in astonishment.
 
...I'm doing the same as well.
 
...I'm doing the same as well.
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But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.
 
But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.
 
*page10|
 
*page10|
"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm"
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"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm[line4]"
 
Saber's voice is weak.
 
Saber's voice is weak.
 
Sparks are flying through the night air.
 
Sparks are flying through the night air.
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...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.
 
...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.
 
*page13|
 
*page13|
""
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"[line8]"
 
I don't know why it catches my attention so much.
 
I don't know why it catches my attention so much.
 
The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire.
 
The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire.
 
It fades away like candy melting under heat.
 
It fades away like candy melting under heat.
 
*page14|
 
*page14|
It
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It[line4]
Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.
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[line4]Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.
 
*page15|
 
*page15|
"Shirou, that was..."
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"[line4]Shirou, that was..."
 
"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it."
 
"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it."
 
I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.
 
I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.
 
*page16|
 
*page16|
"!"
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"[line8]!"
 
I shouldn't be able to see him.
 
I shouldn't be able to see him.
 
I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do.
 
I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do.
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He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.
 
He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.
 
*page17|
 
*page17|
"Damn him!"
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"Damn him[line4]!"
 
I feel a headache.
 
I feel a headache.
 
The chill running down my back won't go away.
 
The chill running down my back won't go away.
My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit
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My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit[line4]
 
*page18|
 
*page18|
 
"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good."
 
"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good."
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The giant starts to retreat through the fire.
 
The giant starts to retreat through the fire.
 
*page20|
 
*page20|
"What? You're running away after all this?"
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"[line3]What? You're running away after all this?"
 
"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."
 
"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."
 
*page21|
 
*page21|
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...I hear Saber's calm voice.
 
...I hear Saber's calm voice.
 
*page24|
 
*page24|
"OhYeah, sorry about that."
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"Oh[line4]Yeah, sorry about that."
 
I manage to answer despite my throbbing head.
 
I manage to answer despite my throbbing head.
 
I let Saber go, and when I stand up...
 
I let Saber go, and when I stand up...
 
I fall on my butt.
 
I fall on my butt.
 
*page25|
 
*page25|
"Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel wellShirou, your back...!"
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"Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel well[line4]Shirou, your back...!"
 
Saber sounds tense.
 
Saber sounds tense.
 
...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache.
 
...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache.
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Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back.
 
Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back.
 
*page28|
 
*page28|
"OuYou're rough"
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"Ou[line4]You're rough[line4]"
 
I try to control my breathing.
 
I try to control my breathing.
 
...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur.
 
...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur.
 
I can manage this pain.
 
I can manage this pain.
 
*page29|
 
*page29|
"HaaHaa, haa"
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"Haa[line4]Haa, haa[line4]"
 
But this felt especially bad.
 
But this felt especially bad.
 
If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like.
 
If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like.
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Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her.
 
Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her.
 
*page34|
 
*page34|
""
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"[line8]"
 
When I plant a foot to follow after her...
 
When I plant a foot to follow after her...
 
My vision suddenly goes white.
 
My vision suddenly goes white.
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But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.
 
But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.
 
*page36|
 
*page36|
What's left is this throbbing within me.
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[line4]What's left is this throbbing within me.
 
What's irritating me?
 
What's irritating me?
 
And what am I so concerned about?
 
And what am I so concerned about?

Latest revision as of 22:17, 4 April 2009

Texte original[edit]

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Mémo technique[edit]

Script corrigé : Anglais

Notes du Traducteur[edit]

Texte à traduire[edit]

  • page0|&f.scripttitle
 "Saber[line4]!!!"
 Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover.
  • page1|
 "Hey, hold on[line4]!"
 I run at full speed towards Saber.
 "Shirou[line4]?"
 She looks dumbfounded.
 Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker.
  • page2|
 I can make it[line4]!
 I can feel the danger coming up behind me.
 "W-Why did you come out...!?"
 I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm[line4]!
  • page3|
 "Are you insane, Master...!?"
 "We'll talk later! Just come this way[line4]"
 I grab Saber in my arms and jump away.
  • page4|
 [line4]The "arrow" is released.
 Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far.
 The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking.
 But at that moment...
  • page5|
 "[wacky len=15]"
 The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might[line4]
  • page6|
 [line4]In that instant...
           All sound is lost.
  • page7|
 "[line8]!"
 I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself.
 Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything.
 All I can feel is the heat burning my skin and the shaking of the ground.
 Many things go flying through the air, and a piece of something pierces my back.
  • page8|
 "......!"
 I grit my teeth and endure it.
 The blinding light must have only lasted for an instant.
 I manage to survive the destruction.
  • page9|
 "Wha[line4]"
 Saber is staring in astonishment.
 ...I'm doing the same as well.
 I don't know what happened.
 Archer's "arrow" razed this cemetery in an instant.
 There is a crater at the center of the explosion.
 Archer has created this destruction.
 But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.
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 "Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm[line4]"
 Saber's voice is weak.
 Sparks are flying through the night air.
 The black giant is standing still in the fire, and everybody here watches this terrible spectacle without words.
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 The crackling of the flames is the only sound present.
 Right when I start to think that this might turn into a big fire...
 "Huh...?"
 Something rolls towards me with a noise.
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 "...A sword?"
 No, it is an "arrow".
 An arrow with a gorgeous hilt and a spiral blade.
 ...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.
  • page13|
 "[line8]"
 I don't know why it catches my attention so much.
 The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire.
 It fades away like candy melting under heat.
  • page14|
 It[line4]
 [line4]Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.
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 "[line4]Shirou, that was..."
 "It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it."
 I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.
  • page16|
 "[line8]!"
 I shouldn't be able to see him.
 I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do.
 He's smiling.
 He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.
  • page17|
 "Damn him[line4]!"
 I feel a headache.
 The chill running down my back won't go away.
 My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit[line4]
  • page18|
 "...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good."
 The girl's cheerful voice echoes through the air.
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 "All right, come back, Berserker. I wanted to get the boring stuff over with first, but I've changed my mind."
 ...The black shadow wavers.
 The giant starts to retreat through the fire.
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 "[line3]What? You're running away after all this?"
 "Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."
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 The giant disappears.
 The girl giggles.
 "Goodbye. Let's play again, Onii-chan."
 Saying this, she goes away.
  • page22|
 "......"
 The unexpected disaster leaves.
 Tohsaka must not intend to follow that girl in spite of what she said.
 Even I can tell that the girl let us go.
 So I don't think Tohsaka will go and seek out such a reckless fight.
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 "Master. I thank you for saving me.
  But can you let go of me now?"
 ...I hear Saber's calm voice.
  • page24|
 "Oh[line4]Yeah, sorry about that."
 I manage to answer despite my throbbing head.
 I let Saber go, and when I stand up...
 I fall on my butt.
  • page25|
 "Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel well[line4]Shirou, your back...!"
 Saber sounds tense.
 ...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache.
 Saber supports me and puts her hand behind my back.
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 "Ouch."
 I feel a sharp pain.
 ...Even though it's not as strong as my headache, there's a sharp pain running through my back.
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 "...This is terrible. It is dangerous like this. Please hold still while I remove this piece."
 "Huh? What do you mean by that...?"
 ......!
 She doesn't hesitate.
 Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back.
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 "Ou[line4]You're rough[line4]"
 I try to control my breathing.
 ...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur.
 I can manage this pain.
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 "Haa[line4]Haa, haa[line4]"
 But this felt especially bad.
 If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like.
  • page30|
 "Your wound is healing... I see, you had a way to heal yourself."
 Sighing with relief, Saber says something strange.
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 "...?"
 A way to heal myself?
 I shouldn't be able to use such difficult magic.
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 "Are you all right, Emiya-kun?"
 ...Tohsaka comes to us.
 I raise my hand to tell her I'm all right.
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 "I see. Then let's go. People might come here with all the commotion we've caused."
 Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her.
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 "[line8]"
 When I plant a foot to follow after her...
 My vision suddenly goes white.
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 "Master...!?"
 ...I feel someone support me as I start to fall.
 But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.
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 [line4]What's left is this throbbing within me.
 What's irritating me?
 And what am I so concerned about?
 ...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb.
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