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==Prologue==
 
==Prologue==
Lautreamont Knight Country, people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.
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Lautreamont Knight Country; people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.
   
 
To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.
 
To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.
   
Sandwiched between the two major powers; a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.
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Sandwiched between the two major powers: a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.
   
 
Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.
 
Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.
   
Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons -- an academy for Dragon Breeders.
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Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons - an academy for Dragon Breeders.
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<!-- This whole Prologue section is really clunky (sincere apologies translator & previous editors!). Whilst it technically makes sense, the multiple paragraph setup probably works better in Japanese than it does in English. Whilst I don't intend to rewrite the whole novel to remove all the unnecessary paragraph breaks, might I suggest a new version with fewer?:
 
<!-- This whole Prologue section is really clunky (sincere apologies translator & previous editors!). Whilst it technically makes sense, the multiple paragraph setup probably works better in Japanese than it does in English. Whilst I don't intend to rewrite the whole novel to remove all the unnecessary paragraph breaks, might I suggest a new version with fewer?:

Latest revision as of 19:10, 13 October 2015

Prologue

Lautreamont Knight Country; people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.

To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.

Sandwiched between the two major powers: a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.

Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.

Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons –- an academy for Dragon Breeders.



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