Talk:High School DxD:Volume 21 Encounter: Difference between revisions
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Latest revision as of 20:56, 20 August 2016
Wouldn't it be better to phrase this: "Shemhazai had brought a boy before me — Azazel." as "Shemhazai had brought a boy before me, Azazel."? Because the way it is now it sounds like Azazel is the boy instead of the person the boy is brought to.--127.0.0.1 20:56, 20 August 2016 (UTC)