Difference between revisions of "Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume2 Chapter2"

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Like 100% pure fruit juice, Asahina the waitress clutched her hands and placed them tightly on her fists and sat stiffly.

Needs some work, no?

1. Clutch your hands

2. Place them on your fists???

I just don't see what Asahina is supposed to be doing...

--Xim 05:43, 18 August 2006 (PDT)

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+== Hands on fists ==
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+''Like 100% pure fruit juice, Asahina the waitress clutched her hands and placed them tightly on her fists and sat stiffly.''
+Needs some work, no?
+. Clutch your hands
+. Place them on your fists???
+I just don't see what Asahina is supposed to be doing...
+--[[User:Xim|Xim]] 05:43, 18 August 2006 (PDT)