Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume6 Asahina Mikuru's Adventure Episode 00: Difference between revisions
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Changed to "Only then did he raise the pitch of his voice and make a serious face." -Teisu | |||
"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter." | "One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter." | ||
changed to "letter inside her shoe box." ? | |||
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The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled, | The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled, | ||
or "leered at". - Teisu | or "leered at". - Teisu | ||
changed to "molested". -Teisu | |||
Revision as of 22:57, 15 September 2006
"Only the did he raise his pitch and made a serious face." This sentence needs to be re-examined. There must be some translation error or missing words because it makes no sense to me.
-Psy Changed to "Only then did he raise the pitch of his voice and make a serious face." -Teisu
"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter."
changed to "letter inside her shoe box." ?
-Teisu
"You look as though you got eaten by an old geezer." The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled, or "leered at". - Teisu changed to "molested". -Teisu