Talk:The Longing Of Shiina Ryo:Volume1 Chapter 1: Ryo: Difference between revisions

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Revision as of 09:31, 7 October 2010

This story is very good. Please continue it into a published novel!

There are some noun/verb agreement errors here and there, but overall there are few errors.

More Kouma!