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"The excessive amount of sweetness from her voice, made even Ryner's heart skip a beat." - ArcherReborn2 | "The excessive amount of sweetness from her voice, made even Ryner's heart skip a beat." - ArcherReborn2 | ||
"In the denominator of seconds, his killing intent towards her rose quickly --- in short, coming to a murdering level." I don't think denominator is a good word in this line. - ArcherReborn2 | |||
Revision as of 04:30, 24 November 2010
"That excessive amount of sweetness from her voice, even for Ryner, his heart skipped a beat." to "The excessive amount of sweetness from her voice, made even Ryner's heart skip a beat." - ArcherReborn2
"In the denominator of seconds, his killing intent towards her rose quickly --- in short, coming to a murdering level." I don't think denominator is a good word in this line. - ArcherReborn2