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== Editors' Notes ==
 
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Revision as of 00:12, 17 November 2006

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Hands on fists

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Like 100% pure fruit juice, Asahina the waitress clutched her hands and placed them tightly on her fists and sat stiffly.

Needs some work, no?

1. Clutch your hands

2. Place them on your fists???

I just don't see what Asahina is supposed to be doing...


--Xim 05:43, 18 August 2006 (PDT)