Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume1 Epilogue: Difference between revisions
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After reading the change, I would like to suggest "remained intact" rather than "has stayed intact". Virtually the same meaning though. --[[ | After reading the change, I would like to suggest "remained intact" rather than "has stayed intact". Virtually the same meaning though. --[[User:Lighthalzen|Lighthalzen]] 20:35, 10 December 2010 (UTC) | ||
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On the sentence: "I want you to reserve me place to return to. I want you to build a place for me to be again." I believe it should be"[...] reserve me a place to return to", or "[...]to reserve my place[...]" as it seems to be lacking something, while I am unsure of what would be the best way.
After reading the change, I would like to suggest "remained intact" rather than "has stayed intact". Virtually the same meaning though. --Lighthalzen 20:35, 10 December 2010 (UTC)