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Just made some edits following the Japanese text, hope I am not intruding. Keep up the good work. | Just made some edits following the Japanese text, hope I am not intruding. Keep up the good work. --[[User:Hariseldon|hariseldon]] 17:37, 2 August 2011 (UCT) | ||
Of course not! Thanks for the help. [[User:Kira0802|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802|Talk]]) 17:50, 2 August 2011 (UCT) | |||
In the first sentence of the Prologue, why isn't the word "'''them'''" omitted? Isn't its usage repetitious since "them" and "to those" refer to the same classification of people? |
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Just made some edits following the Japanese text, hope I am not intruding. Keep up the good work. --hariseldon 17:37, 2 August 2011 (UCT)
Of course not! Thanks for the help. Kira (Talk) 17:50, 2 August 2011 (UCT)
In the first sentence of the Prologue, why isn't the word "them" omitted? Isn't its usage repetitious since "them" and "to those" refer to the same classification of people?