Talk:Date A Live:Volume 1 Chapter 1: Difference between revisions

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-Notable Changes:
-) "I'M NOT HAPPY AT THAT AT ALL!" (Part 2)
-What's wrong: Redundant wording (still grammatically correct but not easy on the ears or line of thought)
-What I did: Changed this line to fix redundancy.
-We have 2 possible outcomes:
-"I'M NOT HAPPY WITH THAT AT ALL!"
-"I'M NOT HAPPY ABOUT THAT AT ALL!"
-I went with option 1 via personal preference.
-The rest is fixing grammar errors.
-On a side note, what's the message behind "Sexual beast"? Is it a compliment or an insult in that context? Cuz the entire time I was just thinking "Sexy beast!"
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