Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter1: Difference between revisions
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
No edit summary |
mNo edit summary |
| (One intermediate revision by the same user not shown) | |
(No difference)
| |
Latest revision as of 12:24, 24 January 2017
- it seems that he hasn’t lost consciousness that much period of time.
Couldnt that be changed into: "that long."
no offense, but the latter half of the chapter feels like reading from machine translation. Maybe you need to make it more smooth? Xenocross 03:54, 19 March 2012 (CDT)
In Part 3 when describing the Hell Cat's claw's effect, 'iron steel' feels clumsy. As steel is refined iron, it sounds redundant. Could this be changed to either 'iron' or 'steel'? Also, undid an edit to a mistake on my part. Dezz (talk) 23:59, 9 October 2014 (CDT)