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"Yeah. I learnt more than enough about the situation I'm in.
 
"Yeah. I learnt more than enough about the situation I'm in.
 
About the Holy Grail War, about the Masters, everything."
 
About the Holy Grail War, about the Masters, everything."
"Then"
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"Then[line3]"
 
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She comes closer and looks up at me.
 
She comes closer and looks up at me.
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That scene flashes through my mind.
 
That scene flashes through my mind.
"You're right. ...Yeah, I'm relieved that you say so."
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"[line3]You're right. ...Yeah, I'm relieved that you say so."
 
I take a deep breath and look at Saber again.
 
I take a deep breath and look at Saber again.
 
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If this is the way things are going to be, I at least want our first greeting to be in style.
 
If this is the way things are going to be, I at least want our first greeting to be in style.
 
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""
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"[line8]"
 
"Saber? Um, are we not supposed to shake hands?"
 
"Saber? Um, are we not supposed to shake hands?"
"That is not the case. I was merely surprised by this sudden action."
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"[line3]That is not the case. I was merely surprised by this sudden action."
 
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Saber takes my hand as she says so.
 
Saber takes my hand as she says so.
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Saber is really serious, so I nod.
 
Saber is really serious, so I nod.
 
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"Hm."
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"[line8]Hm."
 
...Come to think of it, this is weird.
 
...Come to think of it, this is weird.
 
We're under the winter night sky.
 
We're under the winter night sky.
 
I'm shaking hands with a girl I just met, and we're talking like we're making a contract.
 
I'm shaking hands with a girl I just met, and we're talking like we're making a contract.
 
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"Ohhh. I guess I can leave you two, huh?"
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"[line3]Ohhh. I guess I can leave you two, huh?"
"!!"
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"[line4]!!"
 
I quickly let go of her hand.
 
I quickly let go of her hand.
When I turn around, I see Tohsakaand that knight in red.
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When I turn around, I see Tohsaka[line3]and that knight in red.
 
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*page12|
 
"You two are getting along well. You weren't even talking before, but things have certainly changed. What, you trust Saber now?"
 
"You two are getting along well. You weren't even talking before, but things have certainly changed. What, you trust Saber now?"
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But you're one of the Masters now, right? Then I think there's only one thing to do now."
 
But you're one of the Masters now, right? Then I think there's only one thing to do now."
 
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"Umhm?"
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"Um[line4]hm?"
 
Well, she's right. But...
 
Well, she's right. But...
 
"Why? I don't intend to fight you."
 
"Why? I don't intend to fight you."
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"...Heh, you sure are difficult. Then I shall be disappearing. Call on me again after you repay him."
 
"...Heh, you sure are difficult. Then I shall be disappearing. Call on me again after you repay him."
 
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The knight in redArcher, disappears.
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The knight in red[line3]Archer, disappears.
 
No, rather, I just can't see him anymore.
 
No, rather, I just can't see him anymore.
 
According to Tohsaka, Servants are spirits.
 
According to Tohsaka, Servants are spirits.
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There is a forked road ahead of us.
 
There is a forked road ahead of us.
 
One path leads to the main street going towards the Shinto station, and the other leads to the big bridge leading to Miyama City.
 
One path leads to the main street going towards the Shinto station, and the other leads to the big bridge leading to Miyama City.
""
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"[line8]"
 
Tohsaka stops at the intersection.
 
Tohsaka stops at the intersection.
 
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I forgot since I've been concerned with you, but I'm busy. I'm already in Shinto, so I'll go look while I'm here."
 
I forgot since I've been concerned with you, but I'm busy. I'm already in Shinto, so I'll go look while I'm here."
 
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"Go look... you mean for other Masters?"
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"[line4]Go look... you mean for other Masters?"
 
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"Yeah. I don't know about you, but I've been waiting for this time. This night, the start of the battles between seven Masters, the Holy Grail War.
 
"Yeah. I don't know about you, but I've been waiting for this time. This night, the start of the battles between seven Masters, the Holy Grail War.
 
So I can't go home now. Since I couldn't beat Saber, I need to take it out on some other Servant."
 
So I can't go home now. Since I couldn't beat Saber, I need to take it out on some other Servant."
 
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""
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"[line8]"
 
...Tohsaka's eyes show her determination.
 
...Tohsaka's eyes show her determination.
 
That makes me realize...
 
That makes me realize...
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Her mentality and her knowledge as a magus are complete.
 
Her mentality and her knowledge as a magus are complete.
 
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*page34|
""
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"[line8]"
 
So why...?
 
So why...?
 
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*page38|
 
For Tohsaka, everything that happened tonight is unnecessary.
 
For Tohsaka, everything that happened tonight is unnecessary.
'It would be troublesome if we stay together any longer.'
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'It would be troublesome if we stay together any longer.'[r]
 
If she's going to say something like that, she should have left us alone from the beginning.
 
If she's going to say something like that, she should have left us alone from the beginning.
 
Tohsaka's smart, so she should know that all too well.
 
Tohsaka's smart, so she should know that all too well.
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*page43|
 
"I know. But I don't want to be enemies with you if I can help it. I like people like you."
 
"I know. But I don't want to be enemies with you if I can help it. I like people like you."
"Wha"
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"Wha[line3]"
 
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*page44|
 
Tohsaka falls silent for some reason.
 
Tohsaka falls silent for some reason.
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*page46|
 
"I don't like it, but still, I'll take that advice. It won't happen, though. No matter how I look at it, I'll die before Saber does."
 
"I don't like it, but still, I'll take that advice. It won't happen, though. No matter how I look at it, I'll die before Saber does."
"Phew."
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"[line4]Phew."
 
Tohsaka reacts strangely once again.
 
Tohsaka reacts strangely once again.
 
After letting out a sigh, she glances at Saber.
 
After letting out a sigh, she glances at Saber.
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As if she's seen a ghost, her feet stop dead in their tracks.
 
As if she's seen a ghost, her feet stop dead in their tracks.
 
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*page49|
"Hey, have you finished talking?"
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"[line3]Hey, have you finished talking?"
 
*page50|
 
*page50|
 
A youthful voice echoes through the night.
 
A youthful voice echoes through the night.
 
The melodic tone is unmistakably that of a young girl.
 
The melodic tone is unmistakably that of a young girl.
 
My vision is drawn to the top of the hill.
 
My vision is drawn to the top of the hill.
There
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There[line4]
 
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*page51|
 
I don't know when the clouds parted, but a brilliant moon is now shining in the sky.
 
I don't know when the clouds parted, but a brilliant moon is now shining in the sky.
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In this gloomy town of shadow-pictures stands a figure that should not be there.
 
In this gloomy town of shadow-pictures stands a figure that should not be there.
 
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"Berserker."
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"[line3]Berserker."
 
Tohsaka mumbles a word I'm not accustomed to hearing.
 
Tohsaka mumbles a word I'm not accustomed to hearing.
 
Even though I don't know what she means, I can feel the giant's dreadfulness all too well.
 
Even though I don't know what she means, I can feel the giant's dreadfulness all too well.
 
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*page53|
 
That thing is not human.
 
That thing is not human.
Thenit is one of the beings called "Servants", just like Saber.
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Then[line3]it is one of the beings called "Servants", just like Saber.
 
"Good evening, Onii-chan. It's the second time we've met like this."
 
"Good evening, Onii-chan. It's the second time we've met like this."
 
The girl smiles as she says this.
 
The girl smiles as she says this.
 
That innocence sends a chill down my spine.
 
That innocence sends a chill down my spine.
 
The girl looks so out of place next to the thing behind her, it feels like I am dreaming.
 
The girl looks so out of place next to the thing behind her, it feels like I am dreaming.
""
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"[line8]"
 
No, chill is an understatement.
 
No, chill is an understatement.
 
Not just my body, but my mind is frozen as well.
 
Not just my body, but my mind is frozen as well.
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I'm not even staring at it, but its mere presence roots me to the spot.
 
I'm not even staring at it, but its mere presence roots me to the spot.
 
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"I'm surprised. He surpasses Saber in raw power!"
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"[line3]I'm surprised. He surpasses Saber in raw power!"
 
Tohsaka glares at the monster above her, clicking her tongue.
 
Tohsaka glares at the monster above her, clicking her tongue.
In her, I see despairand the spirit to not lose to it.
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In her, I see despair[line3]and the spirit to not lose to it.
 
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"Archer, this isn't an enemy that can be beaten head on. You should fight it in your unique style."
 
"Archer, this isn't an enemy that can be beaten head on. You should fight it in your unique style."
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The presence behind Tohsaka vanishes instantly.
 
The presence behind Tohsaka vanishes instantly.
 
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"Emiya-kun. You can choose whether to run or fight.
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"[line3]Emiya-kun. You can choose whether to run or fight.
 
...But if you can, try to run away."
 
...But if you can, try to run away."
 
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"Nice to meet you, Rin. I am Ilya.
 
"Nice to meet you, Rin. I am Ilya.
 
You should figure it out if I make that Ilyasviel von Einzbern."
 
You should figure it out if I make that Ilyasviel von Einzbern."
"Einzbern"
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"Einzbern[line3]"
 
Tohsaka's body stiffens, apparently recognizing that name.
 
Tohsaka's body stiffens, apparently recognizing that name.
 
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 ...It's a bit windy now.
 It must be partly because this place is on top of a hill.
 The wind is a bit stronger than normal and carries a sharp chill.
  • page1|
 "Shirou. Is your business here complete?"
 "Yeah. I learnt more than enough about the situation I'm in.
  About the Holy Grail War, about the Masters, everything."
 "Then[line3]"
  • page2|
 She comes closer and looks up at me.
 ...It's only natural for her to do so.
 Her fate is determined by my choice.
  • page3|
 "...I don't know if I'm good enough for you, but I've decided to fight as a Master.
  I'm sorry that I'm only an amateur. Are you still content that I'm your Master?"
  • page4|
 "It matters not. You are already my Master. I have already sworn to be your sword."
  • page5|
 That scene flashes through my mind.
 "[line3]You're right. ...Yeah, I'm relieved that you say so."
 I take a deep breath and look at Saber again.
  • page6|
 "Then let's shake hands. Let's do our best together, Saber."
 I extend my right hand.
 I don't care what relationship a Master and his servant should have, nor do I know what I should be doing now.
 If this is the way things are going to be, I at least want our first greeting to be in style.
  • page7|
 "[line8]"
 "Saber? Um, are we not supposed to shake hands?"
 "[line3]That is not the case. I was merely surprised by this sudden action."
  • page8|
 Saber takes my hand as she says so.
 "I shall swear to you once more here. As long as you possess your Command Spell, I shall be your sword."
  • page9|
 "I don't get the situation too well, but yes, please."
 Saber is really serious, so I nod.
  • page10|
 "[line8]Hm."
 ...Come to think of it, this is weird.
 We're under the winter night sky.
 I'm shaking hands with a girl I just met, and we're talking like we're making a contract.
  • page11|
 "[line3]Ohhh. I guess I can leave you two, huh?"
 "[line4]!!"
 I quickly let go of her hand.
 When I turn around, I see Tohsaka[line3]and that knight in red.
  • page12|
 "You two are getting along well. You weren't even talking before, but things have certainly changed. What, you trust Saber now?"
  • page13|
 "Um... No, that's not it... Well, I guess you're right.
  I don't know anything about Saber yet, but I'll be with her from now on."
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 "I see. Then you should be on guard. Since you two are in this war, I won't go easy on you either."
 "?"
 I tilt my head in wonder.
 For a brief moment, I don't get what she said.
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 "...Hey now. Do you understand that we're enemies?
  I brought you here because you weren't my enemy yet.
  But you're one of the Masters now, right? Then I think there's only one thing to do now."
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 "Um[line4]hm?"
 Well, she's right. But...
 "Why? I don't intend to fight you."
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 "...Man, just as I thought. Geez, it was meaningless to bring you here."
 Tohsaka slumps her shoulders.
 "Rin."
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 "What? I thought we promised that you wouldn't talk until I tell you it's okay."
 "I know, but we will make no progress like this.
  We do not need to find out if our enemy is ready or not. If there are enemies we can defeat easily, we should attack them without holding back."
 "Hey, I know that without you having to tell me."
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 "If you know that, act on it. Or what? Are you going to show him mercy again?
  ...Hm. I don't imagine so, but don't tell me there's a 'special' reason for this."
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 "T-That's not it!
  ...I just owe him one. I can't fight him fairly until I repay him for that."
 "...Heh, you sure are difficult. Then I shall be disappearing. Call on me again after you repay him."
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 The knight in red[line3]Archer, disappears.
 No, rather, I just can't see him anymore.
 According to Tohsaka, Servants are spirits.
  • page22|
 Saber says she cannot turn into spirit form, but I'm sure Tohsaka's Servant can since Tohsaka is a complete Master.
 ...Well, that aside...
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 "Hey, Tohsaka. The thing about you 'owing' me... do you mean what happened back then?"
 "Yeah. No matter what the reason may be, you used your Command Spell to stop Saber. So I have to hold back a bit to balance things out."
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 "...Balance? You worry about weird things, Tohsaka."
 "I know. I understand this is just flab on my mind. But I can't help it. I hate owing people."
 She turns away.
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 "But this service is limited. I won't hold back tomorrow, so go and make plans with Saber."
 "...Hm. So the service is only for today?"
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 "Yup. ...Well, I brought you here.
  Um, so I'll at least go back to town with you."
 Tohsaka starts to walk without looking at us.
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 "Let us go, Shirou. As she says, it is not good to stay here."
 "......"
 I nod to Saber and follow Tohsaka.
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 The three of us descend the hill together.
 It might be because Tohsaka is walking ahead, but we go down the hill with few words.
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 There is a forked road ahead of us.
 One path leads to the main street going towards the Shinto station, and the other leads to the big bridge leading to Miyama City.
 "[line8]"
 Tohsaka stops at the intersection.
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 "Tohsaka? Why are you stopping? We should head to the bridge if we're going home, right?"
 "No. I'm sorry, but go home by yourself.
  I forgot since I've been concerned with you, but I'm busy. I'm already in Shinto, so I'll go look while I'm here."
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 "[line4]Go look... you mean for other Masters?"
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 "Yeah. I don't know about you, but I've been waiting for this time. This night, the start of the battles between seven Masters, the Holy Grail War.
  So I can't go home now. Since I couldn't beat Saber, I need to take it out on some other Servant."
  • page33|
 "[line8]"
 ...Tohsaka's eyes show her determination.
 That makes me realize...
 Tohsaka Rin is a magus.
 Her mentality and her knowledge as a magus are complete.
  • page34|
 "[line8]"
 So why...?
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 "So we'll part here. I've repaid my debt, and it would be troublesome if we stay together any longer. We should part here and become enemies from tomorrow on."
 Why does she have this part of her that's unlike a magus?
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 She did not explain the rules to me out of any sense of obligation.
 She just supported me, understanding the situation I'm in, and acted fairly.
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 So things are back to normal now that the explanations are over.
 As a Master, I will just be a target to her now.
 "......"
 But still, Tohsaka said those words to me.
  • page38|
 For Tohsaka, everything that happened tonight is unnecessary.
 'It would be troublesome if we stay together any longer.'[r]
 If she's going to say something like that, she should have left us alone from the beginning.
 Tohsaka's smart, so she should know that all too well.
 But still, she set aside all thoughts of loss or gain and helped me out.
  • page39|
 The Tohsaka in front of me is so different from the one at school.
 Even when I put it nicely, she's sour, cranky, unapproachable, and so different that I want to scream.
 Man, it feels almost like a fraud.
  • page40|
 ...Yet, still...
 Tohsaka Rin is just how everyone thought she was.
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 "I see. Tohsaka, you really are a good person."
 "Huh? What are you saying all of a sudden? I won't go easy on you, even if you flatter me."
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 I know that.
 She won't go easy on me, and that's why she said it'll be a bother if she feels empathy for me.
  • page43|
 "I know. But I don't want to be enemies with you if I can help it. I like people like you."
 "Wha[line3]"
  • page44|
 Tohsaka falls silent for some reason.
 The silent suburbs...
 The church at the top of the hill and the silence of the foreigners' cemetery feel surprisingly warm.
  • page45|
 "A-Anyway, just run to the church if your Servant ever gets killed. If you do, at least your life will be safe."
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 "I don't like it, but still, I'll take that advice. It won't happen, though. No matter how I look at it, I'll die before Saber does."
 "[line4]Phew."
 Tohsaka reacts strangely once again.
 After letting out a sigh, she glances at Saber.
  • page47|
 "All right. I won't give you any more warnings because that'd really be soft.
  Just be careful. Even though Saber is strong, it won't matter if her Master gets killed."
 She turns her back and starts walking.
  • page48|
 But...
 As if she's seen a ghost, her feet stop dead in their tracks.
  • page49|
     "[line3]Hey, have you finished talking?"
  • page50|
 A youthful voice echoes through the night.
 The melodic tone is unmistakably that of a young girl.
 My vision is drawn to the top of the hill.
 There[line4]
  • page51|
 I don't know when the clouds parted, but a brilliant moon is now shining in the sky.
 The shadow is long and grotesque, like a devil in a picture book.
 In this gloomy town of shadow-pictures stands a figure that should not be there.
  • page52|
 "[line3]Berserker."
 Tohsaka mumbles a word I'm not accustomed to hearing.
 Even though I don't know what she means, I can feel the giant's dreadfulness all too well.
  • page53|
 That thing is not human.
 Then[line3]it is one of the beings called "Servants", just like Saber.
 "Good evening, Onii-chan. It's the second time we've met like this."
 The girl smiles as she says this.
 That innocence sends a chill down my spine.
 The girl looks so out of place next to the thing behind her, it feels like I am dreaming.
 "[line8]"
 No, chill is an understatement.
 Not just my body, but my mind is frozen as well.
 That thing is a monster.
 I'm not even staring at it, but its mere presence roots me to the spot.
  • page54|
 "[line3]I'm surprised. He surpasses Saber in raw power!"
 Tohsaka glares at the monster above her, clicking her tongue.
 In her, I see despair[line3]and the spirit to not lose to it.
  • page55|
 "Archer, this isn't an enemy that can be beaten head on. You should fight it in your unique style."
 She murmurs this quietly.
 The knight without form replies to her.
  • page56|
 "Understood. But what about your defense? You cannot defend against his charge."
 "There are three of us. We can manage if all we need to do is defend."
 He must have nodded to her words.
 The presence behind Tohsaka vanishes instantly.
  • page57|
 "[line3]Emiya-kun. You can choose whether to run or fight.
  ...But if you can, try to run away."
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 "Are you done? Can I start now?"
 The girl laughs playfully.
 She lifts the sides of her skirt and curtsies in a manner quite out of place in such a situation.
  • page59|
 "Nice to meet you, Rin. I am Ilya.
  You should figure it out if I make that Ilyasviel von Einzbern."
 "Einzbern[line3]"
 Tohsaka's body stiffens, apparently recognizing that name.
  • page60|
 Perhaps she liked Tohsaka's reaction, as the girl smiles happily. And then...
 "Then I'll kill you now. Go ahead, Berserker."
 ...She orders the strange shape behind her, as if she's singing.
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