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+ | [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-07.ks_english Anglais] |
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+ | Script corrigé : [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-07.ks_script Anglais] |
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*page0|&f.scripttitle |
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− | "Saber!!!" |
+ | "Saber[line4]!!!" |
Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover. |
Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover. |
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*page1| |
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− | "Hey, hold on!" |
+ | "Hey, hold on[line4]!" |
I run at full speed towards Saber. |
I run at full speed towards Saber. |
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− | "Shirou?" |
+ | "Shirou[line4]?" |
She looks dumbfounded. |
She looks dumbfounded. |
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Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker. |
Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker. |
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*page2| |
*page2| |
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− | I can make it! |
+ | I can make it[line4]! |
I can feel the danger coming up behind me. |
I can feel the danger coming up behind me. |
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"W-Why did you come out...!?" |
"W-Why did you come out...!?" |
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− | I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm! |
+ | I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm[line4]! |
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*page3| |
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"Are you insane, Master...!?" |
"Are you insane, Master...!?" |
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− | "We'll talk later! Just come this way" |
+ | "We'll talk later! Just come this way[line4]" |
I grab Saber in my arms and jump away. |
I grab Saber in my arms and jump away. |
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− | The "arrow" is released. |
+ | [line4]The "arrow" is released. |
Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far. |
Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far. |
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The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking. |
The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking. |
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But at that moment... |
But at that moment... |
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*page5| |
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− | "" |
+ | "[wacky len=15]" |
− | The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might |
+ | The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might[line4] |
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− | In that instant... |
+ | [line4]In that instant... |
All sound is lost. |
All sound is lost. |
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− | "!" |
+ | "[line8]!" |
I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself. |
I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself. |
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Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything. |
Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything. |
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I manage to survive the destruction. |
I manage to survive the destruction. |
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− | "Wha" |
+ | "Wha[line4]" |
Saber is staring in astonishment. |
Saber is staring in astonishment. |
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...I'm doing the same as well. |
...I'm doing the same as well. |
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But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition. |
But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition. |
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− | "Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm" |
+ | "Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm[line4]" |
Saber's voice is weak. |
Saber's voice is weak. |
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Sparks are flying through the night air. |
Sparks are flying through the night air. |
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...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile. |
...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile. |
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− | "" |
+ | "[line8]" |
I don't know why it catches my attention so much. |
I don't know why it catches my attention so much. |
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The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire. |
The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire. |
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It fades away like candy melting under heat. |
It fades away like candy melting under heat. |
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− | It |
+ | It[line4] |
− | Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason. |
+ | [line4]Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason. |
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− | "Shirou, that was..." |
+ | "[line4]Shirou, that was..." |
"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it." |
"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it." |
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I raise my head to look at the distant Archer. |
I raise my head to look at the distant Archer. |
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− | "!" |
+ | "[line8]!" |
I shouldn't be able to see him. |
I shouldn't be able to see him. |
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I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do. |
I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do. |
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He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker. |
He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker. |
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− | "Damn him!" |
+ | "Damn him[line4]!" |
I feel a headache. |
I feel a headache. |
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The chill running down my back won't go away. |
The chill running down my back won't go away. |
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− | My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit |
+ | My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit[line4] |
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"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good." |
"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good." |
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The giant starts to retreat through the fire. |
The giant starts to retreat through the fire. |
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− | "What? You're running away after all this?" |
+ | "[line3]What? You're running away after all this?" |
"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer." |
"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer." |
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...I hear Saber's calm voice. |
...I hear Saber's calm voice. |
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− | " |
+ | "Oh[line4]Yeah, sorry about that." |
I manage to answer despite my throbbing head. |
I manage to answer despite my throbbing head. |
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I let Saber go, and when I stand up... |
I let Saber go, and when I stand up... |
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I fall on my butt. |
I fall on my butt. |
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− | "Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel |
+ | "Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel well[line4]Shirou, your back...!" |
Saber sounds tense. |
Saber sounds tense. |
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...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache. |
...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache. |
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Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back. |
Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back. |
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− | " |
+ | "Ou[line4]You're rough[line4]" |
I try to control my breathing. |
I try to control my breathing. |
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...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur. |
...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur. |
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I can manage this pain. |
I can manage this pain. |
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− | " |
+ | "Haa[line4]Haa, haa[line4]" |
But this felt especially bad. |
But this felt especially bad. |
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If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like. |
If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like. |
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Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her. |
Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her. |
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− | "" |
+ | "[line8]" |
When I plant a foot to follow after her... |
When I plant a foot to follow after her... |
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My vision suddenly goes white. |
My vision suddenly goes white. |
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But the feeling fades as all my senses go away. |
But the feeling fades as all my senses go away. |
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− | What's left is this throbbing within me. |
+ | [line4]What's left is this throbbing within me. |
What's irritating me? |
What's irritating me? |
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And what am I so concerned about? |
And what am I so concerned about? |
Latest revision as of 22:17, 4 April 2009
Texte original[edit]
Mémo technique[edit]
Script corrigé : Anglais
Notes du Traducteur[edit]
Texte à traduire[edit]
- page0|&f.scripttitle
"Saber[line4]!!!" Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover.
- page1|
"Hey, hold on[line4]!" I run at full speed towards Saber. "Shirou[line4]?" She looks dumbfounded. Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker.
- page2|
I can make it[line4]! I can feel the danger coming up behind me. "W-Why did you come out...!?" I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm[line4]!
- page3|
"Are you insane, Master...!?" "We'll talk later! Just come this way[line4]" I grab Saber in my arms and jump away.
- page4|
[line4]The "arrow" is released. Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far. The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking. But at that moment...
- page5|
"[wacky len=15]" The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might[line4]
- page6|
[line4]In that instant... All sound is lost.
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"[line8]!" I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself. Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything. All I can feel is the heat burning my skin and the shaking of the ground. Many things go flying through the air, and a piece of something pierces my back.
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"......!" I grit my teeth and endure it. The blinding light must have only lasted for an instant. I manage to survive the destruction.
- page9|
"Wha[line4]" Saber is staring in astonishment. ...I'm doing the same as well. I don't know what happened. Archer's "arrow" razed this cemetery in an instant. There is a crater at the center of the explosion. Archer has created this destruction. But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.
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"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm[line4]" Saber's voice is weak. Sparks are flying through the night air. The black giant is standing still in the fire, and everybody here watches this terrible spectacle without words.
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The crackling of the flames is the only sound present. Right when I start to think that this might turn into a big fire... "Huh...?" Something rolls towards me with a noise.
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"...A sword?" No, it is an "arrow". An arrow with a gorgeous hilt and a spiral blade. ...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.
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"[line8]" I don't know why it catches my attention so much. The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire. It fades away like candy melting under heat.
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It[line4] [line4]Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.
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"[line4]Shirou, that was..." "It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it." I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.
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"[line8]!" I shouldn't be able to see him. I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do. He's smiling. He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.
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"Damn him[line4]!" I feel a headache. The chill running down my back won't go away. My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit[line4]
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"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good." The girl's cheerful voice echoes through the air.
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"All right, come back, Berserker. I wanted to get the boring stuff over with first, but I've changed my mind." ...The black shadow wavers. The giant starts to retreat through the fire.
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"[line3]What? You're running away after all this?" "Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."
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The giant disappears. The girl giggles. "Goodbye. Let's play again, Onii-chan." Saying this, she goes away.
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"......" The unexpected disaster leaves. Tohsaka must not intend to follow that girl in spite of what she said. Even I can tell that the girl let us go. So I don't think Tohsaka will go and seek out such a reckless fight.
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"Master. I thank you for saving me. But can you let go of me now?" ...I hear Saber's calm voice.
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"Oh[line4]Yeah, sorry about that." I manage to answer despite my throbbing head. I let Saber go, and when I stand up... I fall on my butt.
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"Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel well[line4]Shirou, your back...!" Saber sounds tense. ...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache. Saber supports me and puts her hand behind my back.
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"Ouch." I feel a sharp pain. ...Even though it's not as strong as my headache, there's a sharp pain running through my back.
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"...This is terrible. It is dangerous like this. Please hold still while I remove this piece." "Huh? What do you mean by that...?" ......! She doesn't hesitate. Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back.
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"Ou[line4]You're rough[line4]" I try to control my breathing. ...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur. I can manage this pain.
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"Haa[line4]Haa, haa[line4]" But this felt especially bad. If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like.
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"Your wound is healing... I see, you had a way to heal yourself." Sighing with relief, Saber says something strange.
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"...?" A way to heal myself? I shouldn't be able to use such difficult magic.
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"Are you all right, Emiya-kun?" ...Tohsaka comes to us. I raise my hand to tell her I'm all right.
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"I see. Then let's go. People might come here with all the commotion we've caused." Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her.
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"[line8]" When I plant a foot to follow after her... My vision suddenly goes white.
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"Master...!?" ...I feel someone support me as I start to fall. But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.
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[line4]What's left is this throbbing within me. What's irritating me? And what am I so concerned about? ...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb.
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