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==Prologue== | ==Prologue== | ||
Lautreamont Knight Country | Lautreamont Knight Country; people called it the country of Dragon Breeders. | ||
To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom. | To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom. | ||
Sandwiched between the two major powers | Sandwiched between the two major powers: a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy. | ||
Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy. | Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy. | ||
Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons | Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons –- an academy for Dragon Breeders. | ||
<!-- This whole Prologue section is really clunky (sincere apologies translator & previous editors!). Whilst it technically makes sense, the multiple paragraph setup probably works better in Japanese than it does in English. Whilst I don't intend to rewrite the whole novel to remove all the unnecessary paragraph breaks, might I suggest a new version with fewer?: | <!-- This whole Prologue section is really clunky (sincere apologies translator & previous editors!). Whilst it technically makes sense, the multiple paragraph setup probably works better in Japanese than it does in English. Whilst I don't intend to rewrite the whole novel to remove all the unnecessary paragraph breaks, might I suggest a new version with fewer?: | ||
Latest revision as of 17:10, 13 October 2015
Prologue
Lautreamont Knight Country; people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.
To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.
Sandwiched between the two major powers: a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.
Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.
Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons –- an academy for Dragon Breeders.
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