Difference between revisions of "Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume10 Epilogue"
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== Just some minor edits == |
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| − | “Wonder what mr and mother would be thinking at home. When I sy fatheaid I wanted to serve the Imperial Guards, they were so happy…and now we’re going back as criminals. I’d probably cause a huge trouble. Huh, I’ll really trouble them now. Geez.” |
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| − | I don't know if the "mr" should have a capitalized "M". |
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| − | I just left it for now and posted on the forums regarding this sentence. |
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EDIT: I noticed when Malicorne said "I’d probably cause huge trouble. Huh, I’ll really trouble them now. Geez.", I'm not really sure about the "I'd probably cause huge trouble" (My edit). The previous text was "I'd probably cause A huge trouble". I get the feeling that it is meaning to say "A lot of trouble" but I don't really know. |
EDIT: I noticed when Malicorne said "I’d probably cause huge trouble. Huh, I’ll really trouble them now. Geez.", I'm not really sure about the "I'd probably cause huge trouble" (My edit). The previous text was "I'd probably cause A huge trouble". I get the feeling that it is meaning to say "A lot of trouble" but I don't really know. |
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Latest revision as of 15:10, 3 February 2010
realized that some people may not read the "comments" i made to the main text... rather than editing directly as the changes i propose do change context of rather than just the names and such...
in first paragraph, i was thinking that rather than "receiving a wagon", it probably is "getting a wagon" or "taking a wagon"...
and in the 2nd paragraph, i was thinking that "even if her body was healthy" or "even if her body was fine" rather than "even if her body was normal" (regarding sylphid)...
Just some minor edits[edit]
Made some changes with capitals and such.
EDIT: I noticed when Malicorne said "I’d probably cause huge trouble. Huh, I’ll really trouble them now. Geez.", I'm not really sure about the "I'd probably cause huge trouble" (My edit). The previous text was "I'd probably cause A huge trouble". I get the feeling that it is meaning to say "A lot of trouble" but I don't really know.
Anyone care to help?
