Difference between revisions of "Akiha haruhi v9 prologue"

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sadly first half part memo is vanished because of crash of firefox....
low:The talk about a lack of respect in the tone of high school students is indeed true.
 
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:imifumei
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|low]] The talk about a lack of respect in the tone of high school students is indeed true.
low:The president turned his head and looked at Haruhi after hearing this. “Hmph~”, though it seems he cannot be bothered with that.
 
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**imifumei
:haruhi turned his head
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|low]] The president turned his head and looked at Haruhi after hearing this. “Hmph~”, though it seems he cannot be bothered with that.
culture:“It seems we were quite successful. It's perfect, really perfect."
 
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**haruhi turned his head
"tyororon" missing
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|culture]]“It seems we were quite successful. It's perfect, really perfect."
swung the connector of the extension cable while thinking about the fact that this third year president actually allowed us to borrow their power source just because of this.
 
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**"tyororon" missing
lowest: "just because of this"??? because of the awesomeness of OS made by Nagato? <- this is wrong...
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|lowest]] swung the connector of the extension cable while thinking about the fact that this third year president actually allowed us to borrow their power source just because of this.
an whole paragraph is missing... between "source just because of this." and "I connected the plug to the"
 
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**"just because of this"??? because of the awesomeness of OS made by Nagato? <- this is wrong...
trans.:newpaper, original:Frisbee
 
an whole paragraph is missing... between "...for you would be as free as me." and “Kyon, start playing the DVD now!”
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|high]] an whole paragraph is missing... between "source just because of this." and "I connected the plug to the"
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|lowerst]]trans.:newpaper, original:Frisbee
“Like movie trailers. Aren’t they shown in cinemas before the ac
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|high]] an whole paragraph is missing... between "...for you would be as free as me." and “Kyon, start playing the DVD now!”
wrong: in cinema , correct; in TV CM in movie programs.
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|normal]]“Like movie trailers. Aren’t they shown in cinemas before the ac
high:“The Revenge of Nagato Yuki will open during the spring cultural festival!” that Haruhi screamed at the end?
 
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**wrong: in cinema , correct; in TV CM in movie programs.
spring->fall
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|high]] “The Revenge of Nagato Yuki will open during the spring cultural festival!” that Haruhi screamed at the end?
Taniguchi even talked about how much blood he spilled just to produce his article back then.
 
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**spring->fall
ple on the director’s table.
 
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|normal]]Taniguchi even talked about how much blood he spilled just to produce his article back then.
directors table??? table in front of Nagato
 
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**ple on the director’s table.
normal:"I attempted to concentrate on the story book in front of me as I tried to stop my curiosity from wandering further…" and the last paragraph is enough a mismatch to retranslate it.
 
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**directors table??? maybe "table in front of Nagato"
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|normal]]"I attempted to concentrate on the story book in front of me as I tried to stop my curiosity from wandering further…" and the last paragraph is enough a mismatch to retranslate it.

Revision as of 00:55, 10 May 2007

sadly first half part memo is vanished because of crash of firefox....

  • low The talk about a lack of respect in the tone of high school students is indeed true.
    • imifumei
  • low The president turned his head and looked at Haruhi after hearing this. “Hmph~”, though it seems he cannot be bothered with that.
    • haruhi turned his head
  • culture“It seems we were quite successful. It's perfect, really perfect."
    • "tyororon" missing
  • lowest swung the connector of the extension cable while thinking about the fact that this third year president actually allowed us to borrow their power source just because of this.
    • "just because of this"??? because of the awesomeness of OS made by Nagato? <- this is wrong...
  • high an whole paragraph is missing... between "source just because of this." and "I connected the plug to the"
  • lowersttrans.:newpaper, original:Frisbee
  • high an whole paragraph is missing... between "...for you would be as free as me." and “Kyon, start playing the DVD now!”
  • normal“Like movie trailers. Aren’t they shown in cinemas before the ac
    • wrong: in cinema , correct; in TV CM in movie programs.
  • high “The Revenge of Nagato Yuki will open during the spring cultural festival!” that Haruhi screamed at the end?
    • spring->fall
  • normalTaniguchi even talked about how much blood he spilled just to produce his article back then.
    • ple on the director’s table.
    • directors table??? maybe "table in front of Nagato"
  • normal"I attempted to concentrate on the story book in front of me as I tried to stop my curiosity from wandering further…" and the last paragraph is enough a mismatch to retranslate it.