Difference between revisions of "Akiha haruhi v9 prologue"
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|high]] “The Revenge of Nagato Yuki will open during the spring cultural festival!” that Haruhi screamed at the end? |
*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|high]] “The Revenge of Nagato Yuki will open during the spring cultural festival!” that Haruhi screamed at the end? |
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**spring->fall |
**spring->fall |
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+ | **usually cultuaral festival is hold in fall in each year. |
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*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|normal]]Taniguchi even talked about how much blood he spilled just to produce his article back then. |
*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion|normal]]Taniguchi even talked about how much blood he spilled just to produce his article back then. |
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**ple on the director’s table. |
**ple on the director’s table. |
Revision as of 01:01, 10 May 2007
sadly first half part memo is vanished because of crash of firefox....
- low The talk about a lack of respect in the tone of high school students is indeed true.
- imifumei
- low The president turned his head and looked at Haruhi after hearing this. “Hmph~”, though it seems he cannot be bothered with that.
- haruhi turned his head
- culture“It seems we were quite successful. It's perfect, really perfect."
- "tyororon" missing
- lowest swung the connector of the extension cable while thinking about the fact that this third year president actually allowed us to borrow their power source just because of this.
- "just because of this"??? because of the awesomeness of OS made by Nagato? <- this is wrong...
- high an whole paragraph is missing... between "source just because of this." and "I connected the plug to the"
- lowersttrans.:newpaper, original:Frisbee
- high an whole paragraph is missing... between "...for you would be as free as me." and “Kyon, start playing the DVD now!”
- normal“Like movie trailers. Aren’t they shown in cinemas before the ac
- wrong: in cinema , correct; in TV CM in movie programs.
- high “The Revenge of Nagato Yuki will open during the spring cultural festival!” that Haruhi screamed at the end?
- spring->fall
- usually cultuaral festival is hold in fall in each year.
- normalTaniguchi even talked about how much blood he spilled just to produce his article back then.
- ple on the director’s table.
- directors table??? maybe "table in front of Nagato"
- normal"I attempted to concentrate on the story book in front of me as I tried to stop my curiosity from wandering further…" and the last paragraph is enough a mismatch to retranslate it.