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Thanks for the translation again :D. [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] 10:38, 6 July 2012 (CDT)
  
Thanks for the translation again :D. [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] 10:38, 6 July 2012 (CDT)
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It's correct, probably something relating to his assassination training/skills.
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2nd: Yep, I missed out something, actually I missed out quite a number of things with weird typos here and there all together, haha. --[[User:KuroiHikari|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari|Talk]] | ) 10:45, 6 July 2012 (CDT)

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Hi, I would like to ask about 2 parts in Part 1.

First, "Sorry, the short sword is more of my specialty", is there a mistake here because I thought that Kamito is more used to using the long sword, I could be wrong though.

Second, "Fianna was suspended in midair as she writhed, but she was helpless spirit opponent. " Maybe there are some words missing here? The sentence's flow is not smooth.

Thanks for the translation again :D. Zakashi 10:38, 6 July 2012 (CDT)


It's correct, probably something relating to his assassination training/skills.

2nd: Yep, I missed out something, actually I missed out quite a number of things with weird typos here and there all together, haha. --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 10:45, 6 July 2012 (CDT)

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