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| − | I rearranged some phrases (see above), and I'll go over some of the other sentences later. |
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| + | Made some large changes, usually structural or by rearranging the order of words and phrases. |
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| + | ''Melancholy-to-Sigh.'' I changed that to "the half a year when our melancholy became frustration". I'm not too sure if Kyon's sighs represent frustration or exasperation, but after half a year of Haruhi, it's probably the former. Hopefully that appropriately conveys the meaning of 憂鬱が溜息に移り変わる |
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| − | [[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| + | ---[[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] 08:39, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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Revision as of 17:39, 2 May 2006
Vague/Awkward sounding phrases
..., or even those who-kows-if-they-are-incidents-or-accidents kind of storms, literally.
awaiting sudden inspiration to translate this line properly and correctly.
--Thelastguardian 22:17, 1 May 2006 (PDT)
I broke up the run-on sentence and tried to convey the sense of 巻き込む。
Eleutheria 08:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)
Translator Notes
requesting heavy edit in terms of clarity of ideas. I was constantly getting distracted when I was translating this chapter.
--Thelastguardian 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)
Update: Made some large changes, usually structural or by rearranging the order of words and phrases.
Melancholy-to-Sigh. I changed that to "the half a year when our melancholy became frustration". I'm not too sure if Kyon's sighs represent frustration or exasperation, but after half a year of Haruhi, it's probably the former. Hopefully that appropriately conveys the meaning of 憂鬱が溜息に移り変わる
---Eleutheria 08:39, 2 May 2006 (PDT)
