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This question makes Giulio's face a little disappointed, as if he wanted to hear that this is was not a problem.

I'm guessing it's like: "This question makes Giulio's face a little disappointed, as if what he wanted to hear was not this problem/issue"

I'm taking into consideration that he later talks about Silvia's pain, which is the main thing that he was worried about.

Oh, what do you think about "lowly" instead of "humble" for some parts, because I know some Chinese words for humble can actually refer to inferior or self deprecating.

Like: This humble servant would like to ask, Your Highness who is now in pain, is there nothing this humble servant can do to help? The second humble sounds kinda awkward.

Xersax (talk) 05:59, 29 December 2013 (CST)

Okay. Was confused due to the "is was". Xersax (talk) 09:49, 29 December 2013 (CST)

Volume 2 Chapter 5

"You pig head, the hull is only shaking slightly, get up, you look so ugly, later you need to attend the blade ceremony!"

Ugly --> Unkempt or disgusting or horrendous. Cause well... They were puking... Can't do much if you're ugly... XD

How do you want to express thought bubbles? Previously you used brackets "( )" in chapter 1 but then changed to "--" in chapter 5. I could do some sample tests using different styles of doing and you could look through for what's best.

Xersax (talk) 03:24, 5 January 2014 (CST)

Expressing Gratitude