Talk:Toradora!:Volume4 Chapter2: Difference between revisions

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-This sentence seems incomplete:
-Taking the impact of his smile from such a close range, Taiga was out of it, just picking off rice that was sticking to her fingertips using her nails.
-Reword to something like this?
-Taking the impact of his smile from such a close range, Taiga was knocked out of it and started to absent-mindedly pick off rice that was sticking to her fingertips using her nails.
-[[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 11:50, 21 September 2008 (PDT)

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