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| Hi there, I just joined after my IP was frozen for trying to improve the Part 2 to Volume 9 Chapter 1's readability. I am unsure about how to resolve that as I lost the page. Anyways, I understand that there is need for translating but I also thought grammar and flow was important for reader enjoyment. I understand there are certain rules, so I figured at the very least I should display the edit so my work wasn't wasted:
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| The young girl was in the clouds and the buildings and trees looked tiny.
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| "Eh!!?"
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| The intense sensation in the stomach of a slow free-falling.
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| 'Is this a dream?'
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| The suffocating heights making it difficult to breathe.
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| The thin girl's body piercing through the moist clouds. The smells and tastes.
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| 'I was just…'
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| And then terror.
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| Her entire body was telling her that this wasn't a dream.
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| "Hiii~!!!"
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| The young girl heard a scream escaping her throat and felt her eye's tearing.
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| The scream promoted the fact that this sensation was reality.
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| She didn't know how.
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| But, she was in the sky. Falling.
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| 'If I don't do something.'
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| 'I'm going to die'
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| Die.
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| Without a doubt die.
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| No matter how young the young girl is, she clearly understood the fact that she would die if she fell from such a height.
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| 'I don't want to die!'
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| She used all of her magic power.
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| She knew that the ground was rapidly expanding in focus.
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| The young girl raised the wind.
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| Aimed directly below herself in order to fall onto it.
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| She thought that her velocity would fall a bit.
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| However, she quickly returned to her previous velocity.
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| Wind was no good.
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| What would be good to do at this kind of time?
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| What did the young boy say?
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| Remember, remember.
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| Didn't the young boy say anything?
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| What to do at a time when you're falling from a high place…
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| "Soften the impact," he said in a calm voice.
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| 'Soften?'
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| “That's right. Engulf yourself in something soft.”
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| However, exactly how soft?
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| What would it be good to create?
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| I don't know, I don't know, I don't know!
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| She formed water clouds, spun upward wind currents, layered earth sheets, controlled fire.
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| 'Slow down~...!'
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| She did everything she could in a frenzy.
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| But... she crashed.
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| She felt her entire body submersed into the ground in a crater.
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| 'Am I alive?'
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| Her body covered in moderate cuts, bruises, dirt and grass clumping to her clammy skin, unbearable pain in both of her legs.
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| It was a miserable state, her beaten up again, but the young girl survived.
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| She laid there for a few moments, looking up to where she just was...
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| But... somehow I softened the crash (as Rudi once told me) ... or.
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| With only fractures, she survived a fall from a fatally high altitude...
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| But, she felt like sharp needles stabbing into her legs.
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| “Ugo . . . aaa!"
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| In plain sight, a monster stood there.
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| It looked like a huge wild boar... but it was walking on two legs and had four arms. <ref> Sounds like a pretty crazy boar, but ni soku hoko, that is walking on two legs right? </ref>
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| The young girl heard about this monster.
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| She was told by her father if she were to ever encounter it," Absolutely never get close. Without letting out a sound... wait for it to pass,"
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| "If you're noticed by it then use magic to escape as fast as you can."
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| It was an opponent where she was told to do that.
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| Terminate Boar.
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| The young girl had many things she did not know, but she did know that the Terminate Boar was rarely seen.
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| It was said they come out from the forest and would attack with an E rank monster, the Assault Dog, accompanying it.
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| Locally, it is the most dangerous monster in Asura.
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| Unusual for the peaceful Asura Kingdom, it was a monster worthy of C rank.
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| The danger of it rises up from C rank to B rank if it is accompanied by Assault Dogs.
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| That is most certainly the Terminate Boar.
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| "Kyaaa~!"
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| Frantically, the young girl screamed and frantically swelled up magic towards the menacing Terminate Boar.
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| Intermediate Magic, [Icicle Breaker].
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| She wasn't holding back at all... Full Power.
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| She was striking it with her strongest magic from the start stretching her utmost limits.
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| It was a direct hit.
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| The Terminate Boar froze two layers thick, fell next to her, shattered, and frozen shards scattered near her.
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| "Ha . . . ha . . . agu!!"
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| After trying to stand up in a breath, she realized that both of her leg's bones were practically shattered too.
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| The young girl used healing magic and swiftly healed them.
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| Ever since she assisted at the cleric's office in the healing of people, healing magic was a strong point of hers.
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| But, it wasn't as if she was used to this level of severe, sudden pain.
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| She bitterly used the magic with a tear-stained face.
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| " . . . Ha . . . ha."
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| Standing up. Shortness of breath.
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| An intense headache started up.
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| Dizziness. Her consciousness was warping and she felt faint.
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| Later on, the young girl realized she was out of magic power.
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| Suppressing the free-falling entry and even defeating a fearsome monster with magic.
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| Not any type of magic, all of it was done without restraint using her greatest magic.
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| Which is why, the young girl's magic power was exhausted.
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| "A...are we saved? Y...you, where did you appear from? What is your name?"
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| She heard a voice from behind her.
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| With her head throbbing and her vision hazy, the young girl turned her attention to this voice.
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| There was a... girl?
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| With golden hair... and ... a beautiful face that almost gives the impression it is transparent...
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| It was a girl wearing a pure white one piece with detailed embroidery... it seemed the materials were 1,000 times more expensive than what she received for her birthday.
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| On the angelic girl's side, leaned a boy whose arm was injured and was leaning against a tree. And next to this boy, a man was... It seemed like his robe was crimson red and wet with blood. Yes, the man was soaked in . . . blood.
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| "Sylphiette . . . ”
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| The young girl answered and fainted.
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| ---
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| This is how Sylphy encountered Asura Kingdom, Second Princess Ariel Anemoi Asura.
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| <noinclude>
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