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Good job Akira, as always. I'd like to ask something though. Is it possible to keep such a sentence structure? | |||
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*With a seemingly anxious face, Mazarin asked. | |||
*With ladylike fastidiousness, Henrietta muttered. | |||
I am not sure how to put this, but this structure makes the sentence feel...more storylike? Cuz if you look at the alternative, | |||
*Mazarin asked with a seemingly anxious face. | |||
This sounds like stating a fact. Besides, I'm inclined to think that the author wanted to stress the first clause, ''how'' it happened, which explains why the qualifying part is placed before the verb. | |||
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Revision as of 19:19, 27 May 2009
ZnT edits
Good job Akira, as always. I'd like to ask something though. Is it possible to keep such a sentence structure?
Eg:
- With a seemingly anxious face, Mazarin asked.
- With ladylike fastidiousness, Henrietta muttered.
I am not sure how to put this, but this structure makes the sentence feel...more storylike? Cuz if you look at the alternative,
- Mazarin asked with a seemingly anxious face.
This sounds like stating a fact. Besides, I'm inclined to think that the author wanted to stress the first clause, how it happened, which explains why the qualifying part is placed before the verb.