User talk:Akirasav

ZnT edits

Good job Akira, as always. I'd like to ask something though. Is it possible to keep such a sentence structure?

Eg:

• With a seemingly anxious face, Mazarin asked.
• With ladylike fastidiousness, Henrietta muttered.

I am not sure how to put this, but this structure makes the sentence feel...more storylike? Cuz if you look at the alternative,

• Mazarin asked with a seemingly anxious face.

This sounds like stating a fact. Besides, I'm inclined to think that the author wanted to stress the first clause, how it happened, which explains why the qualifying part is placed before the verb.

--Zyzzyva165

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Hmm...I see your point. That fairly depends on how it is read actually. For me, my brain tells me the other way round. =P I'd like to retain the original sentence structure, if that's okay with you. =) As for the past edits, don't bother about them. Your edit is not wrong, after all.

--Zyzzyva165 23:03, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

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Well yes, they do.

--Zyzzyva165 22:59, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

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ROFL. I just need somewhere to properly learn Japanese, and to relax a bit. F/Z would still be my main project though. =P

--Zyzzyva165 08:03, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Ahhh~ I totally forgot to respond to your comment...O_o. As for novels that have furigana, ALL of the books by Aoitori Bunko, (that have the blue/white border), have furigana over all the kanji. I have 2 books from them, one I kind of liked was "7th Period UFO Research." the books are aimed at children though, but they are still really good I think...hang on a bit more and I'll look up some more. http://shop.kodansha.jp/bc/aoitori/index_main.html

--Krikit 09:07, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Nice edits. You forgot an "n" in "Myoznitnirn" by the way. =P

--Zyzzyva165 06:19, 3 July 2009 (UTC)