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'irritating smell'... 'easily consume my life'... *very curious* | 'irritating smell'... 'easily consume my life'... *very curious* | ||
==Editing== | |||
Tenses need to be sorted here: | |||
"To me it doesn't look like he had a goal. It looked like he has just been playing with us." <-- this is definitely incorrect. Tenses are mixed up. | |||
"To me it '''doesn't''' look like he '''has''' a goal. It '''looks''' like he '''has''' just been playing with us." | |||
"To me it '''didn't''' look like he '''had''' a goal. It '''looked''' like he '''had''' just been playing with us." | |||
"To me it '''doesn't''' look like he '''had''' a goal. It '''looks''' like he '''had''' just been playing with us." | |||
Also, perhaps the second 'like' should be replaced with 'as though'. [[User:MatrixM|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM|talk]]) 15:24, 16 July 2013 (CDT) | |||
Latest revision as of 20:24, 16 July 2013
yeayyyyyyyyyyyyy fourth V is out!!!! it means more translations!!!!! thanks for your hard work^^
Thanks man!! I'm sooo excited right now!
'irritating smell'... 'easily consume my life'... *very curious*
Editing[edit]
Tenses need to be sorted here:
"To me it doesn't look like he had a goal. It looked like he has just been playing with us." <-- this is definitely incorrect. Tenses are mixed up.
"To me it doesn't look like he has a goal. It looks like he has just been playing with us." "To me it didn't look like he had a goal. It looked like he had just been playing with us." "To me it doesn't look like he had a goal. It looks like he had just been playing with us."
Also, perhaps the second 'like' should be replaced with 'as though'. MatrixM (talk) 15:24, 16 July 2013 (CDT)