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OOOOH GASP GIVE ME THE NEXT PART QUICK!
OOOOH GASP GIVE ME THE NEXT PART QUICK!
I want to see Kinji in Hysteria Mode again
I want to see Kinji in Hysteria Mode again
I have a question. In the line "The Sunday morning of the day I heard Aria's hospital leaving plans" (Line 13), should "leaving" be changed to "discharge" ? Although "hospital leaving" is still grammatically correct, "hospital discharge" is the right word in this case I think.

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OOOOH GASP GIVE ME THE NEXT PART QUICK! I want to see Kinji in Hysteria Mode again

I have a question. In the line "The Sunday morning of the day I heard Aria's hospital leaving plans" (Line 13), should "leaving" be changed to "discharge" ? Although "hospital leaving" is still grammatically correct, "hospital discharge" is the right word in this case I think.