Talk:Hidan no Aria:Volume2 Chapter1

Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the lines of 'That's what she should have been' or 'That's what she should be' or 'That's what I thought'/'That's what I thought she was', whereas in the second case I might suggest something on the lines of 'Shirayuki Hotogi: a Yamato Nadeshiko./A modest [...].' for the first two lines. In any case, very happy at translation being done for this fiction! Thank you!

Hmm. I think that you didn't check my page. As you see, I'm translating the novels Chinese-English. And I only know it by reading and speaking it. So,I have troubles translating. Normally, when I'm speaking a language(I'm trilingual) I think in the language I am currently speaking. That's why I'm not good at finding the correct ways to express my thoughts. If you want, you can completely edit it. My job is translating, and your's would be editing. Well, in any case, thanks for the comment. You can ask the other translators for Hidan no Aria and you might edit it as you like. Kira0802 20:39, 4 January 2011 (UTC)

Translation Suggestion: Instead of Women-hater, maybe making Kin-chan-sama's nickname "Enemy of Women" or "Ladykiller" since it implies that he is both unnaturally good with women/perverted as well as the meaning that Kin-chan-sama prefers, i.e. that he doesn't get along with women.