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== PART 1 Content Discussion == |
== PART 1 Content Discussion == |
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The use of "horror" in "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that there was no need for horror." seems out of place. I suggest that the sentence could be reworded to still keep a variation of the horror aspect as "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that it was beyond scary." |
The use of "horror" in "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that there was no need for horror." seems out of place. I suggest that the sentence could be reworded to still keep a variation of the horror aspect as "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that it was beyond scary." |
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| + | Umm,it does look more suitable.Will try to ask the translator.[[User:User753|User753]] |
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Revision as of 12:40, 27 April 2012
PART 1 Content Discussion
The use of "horror" in "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that there was no need for horror." seems out of place. I suggest that the sentence could be reworded to still keep a variation of the horror aspect as "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that it was beyond scary."
Umm,it does look more suitable.Will try to ask the translator.User753
