Talk:Kino no Tabi:Volume4

Congratulations on the completion of volume 4 ^^.

Now that I go and see the whole volume, I notice something in the Illustration Page: that grape illustration called page 155, shouldn't it be an illustration that is put at the end of the chapter "Grapes" -On Duty-? Why is it the next illustration of "Land of Acknowledgement"?

And this volume has some in-between illustrations in the chapter "Solo" and chapter "The Country Tower". I think we should know where exactly they are put in the original novel, so that we can decide the order of the chapters' content and the illustrations.

BloodyKitty (talk) 11:35, 26 August 2012 (CDT)

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User753, as usual, the full text page is much appreciated... :D

Thank you, BloodyKitty. Ah, that's right.... 0_0 The 'grapes' should obviously be after the chapter 'grapes'. I was careless again... hehe I'll make the necessary changes. Thanks for pointing that out! ^_^

Yeah, I think I'll insert some hidden comments in the chapters to point out where the pictures should go.

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Sorry for the late reply.
Thank you for the help BloodyKitty-san.
And thank you for the pointer Ella-san, it's really helpful.

Btw, about reference #9;regarding 'hovee', I just realized that it's a nickname for 'hovercraft'. Mind if I change the pdf version footnote regarding that?

... Pdf version... Oh, I almost forgot. The pdf will be uploaded as soon as the rechecking and bookmarking finished.-/-User753-Talk- 00:09, 28 August 2012 (CDT)

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Don't worry about it, no one's in a rush :) Yes, it is short for hovercraft or hover vehicle. You can change it ^_^ Thank you! I'll be looking forward to it... XD

Ella.servantes (talk) 00:43, 28 August 2012 (CDT)

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Thank you for the wait. Here's the link, please check it.-/-User753-Talk- 01:34, 28 August 2012 (CDT)

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Fast... 0_0

Here's my comments:

- page numbers
- quote page should be after table of contents
- Chapter 7 does not have headers
- the text for Chapters 5,6,7,8,9,10,11 and epilogue used older versions of the text (they're not yet proofread)

Uhmm... I don't know if it's intentional, but why is it that your name in the credits page has a smaller font size? :O

Ella.servantes (talk) 02:24, 28 August 2012 (CDT)

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Uhm, I don't think you should put my name in the credits page. I did not correct any mistakes in any chapters, I did not do any change to the pictures, I did not make the pdf, I only give you guys some small suggestions. Putting my name there makes me feel kinda ashamed. BloodyKitty (talk) 04:56, 28 August 2012 (CDT)

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To BloddyKitty-san: Why is that? You did and still are helping us my friend. Suggestion is also a way of editing. Although I admit that putting my name on credit list is still quite embarrassing.

I almost forgot, here is the revised version. Please check it. Hopefully I don't forget anything this time (luckily my body parts are not detachable, otherwise I'll literally left out my nose or ears somewhere).-/-User753-Talk- 07:45, 28 August 2012 (CDT)