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Revision as of 03:03, 18 January 2013
- Rizo536 -
Notable Changes:
1) "I'M NOT HAPPY AT THAT AT ALL!" (Part 2)
What's wrong: Redundant wording (still grammatically correct but not easy on the ears or line of thought)
What I did: Changed this line to fix redundancy.
We have 2 possible outcomes:
"I'M NOT HAPPY WITH THAT AT ALL!" "I'M NOT HAPPY ABOUT THAT AT ALL!" I went with option 1 via personal preference.
The rest is fixing grammar errors.
On a side note, what's the message behind "Sexual beast"? Is it a compliment or an insult in that context? Cuz the entire time I was just thinking "Sexy beast!"
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