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| − | - Rizo536 - |
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| − | Notable Changes: |
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| − | 1) "I'M NOT HAPPY AT THAT AT ALL!" (Part 2) |
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| − | What's wrong: Redundant wording (still grammatically correct but not easy on the ears or line of thought) |
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| − | What I did: Changed this line to fix redundancy. |
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| − | We have 2 possible outcomes: |
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| − | "I'M NOT HAPPY WITH THAT AT ALL!" |
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| − | "I'M NOT HAPPY ABOUT THAT AT ALL!" |
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| − | I went with option 1 via personal preference. |
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| − | The rest is fixing grammar errors. |
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| − | On a side note, what's the message behind "Sexual beast"? Is it a compliment or an insult in that context? Cuz the entire time I was just thinking "Sexy beast!" |
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| − | [[User:Rizo536|Rizo536 - Actual Grammar Nazi]] ([[User talk:Rizo536|talk]]) |
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