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The third sentence/line is a bit awkward. Considering how the sentence flows, perhaps it is "Anxiety and expectations filled and took over the heart".
The third sentence/line is a bit awkward. Considering how the sentence flows, perhaps it is "Anxiety and expectations filled and took over the heart".--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 20:37, 30 March 2013 (CDT)

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The third sentence/line is a bit awkward. Considering how the sentence flows, perhaps it is "Anxiety and expectations filled and took over the heart".--Vu.P (talk) 20:37, 30 March 2013 (CDT)