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| Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.
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| Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.
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| Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)
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| Waiting for a response:
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| <pre>
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| 2425
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| 2426
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| 3426
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| 3503
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| 6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)
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| 6417
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| 6421
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| 6422
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| 6425
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| 6426
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| 6726
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| 6727
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| 6729
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| </pre>
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| Finished Editing(first pass):
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| <pre>
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| 2417
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| 2428
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| 4421
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| 4422
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| 4430
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| 4501
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| 4502
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| 4503
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| 4504
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| 4505
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| 4507
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| 4508
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| 4509
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| 4510
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| 4511
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| 6728
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| 6420
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| </pre>
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