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For the following quote: | |||
"Ohh…as Ryuuji ran scared, the one who had the courage to intervene," | |||
'ran scared' doesn't make too much sense. Did he 'run away scared'? Though I think 'froze up' or 'panicked' makes more sense in the context of the story. | |||
Also, is the narrator saying 'Ohh'? It seems more like a character is saying it and consequently should be in quotes. Thanks. | |||
[[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 16:02, 22 September 2008 (PDT) | |||
Revision as of 23:03, 22 September 2008
For the following quote:
"Ohh…as Ryuuji ran scared, the one who had the courage to intervene,"
'ran scared' doesn't make too much sense. Did he 'run away scared'? Though I think 'froze up' or 'panicked' makes more sense in the context of the story.
Also, is the narrator saying 'Ohh'? It seems more like a character is saying it and consequently should be in quotes. Thanks.
Akirasav 16:02, 22 September 2008 (PDT)