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"He got the feeling that they had been much more carefully constructed than those of some pitiful pension or petit hotel."
"Well, that’s because it really is seaweed…"


Is Ryuuji really referring to a pension plan? Maybe a penthouse/mansion?
This line is very casual. It feels like it should be one of Ryuuji's thoughts. Are the internal thoughts of the characters distinctly marked in the original version?


[[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 16:00, 27 September 2008 (PDT)
"Eventually, she was clenching her teeth where her front teeth were visibly chattering,"


A pension is basically a boardinghouse.  Maybe it's too obscure a term?  If you want, you can switch it with boardinghouse or something similar.
Not a clear sentence.  she can't really clench and have her teeth chatter at the same time.


[[User:Trabius|Trabius]] 18:03, 27 September 2008 (PDT)
[[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 20:08, 28 September 2008 (PDT)
 
Lol, I learn something new everyday.
 
[[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 19:45, 27 September 2008 (PDT)

Revision as of 03:09, 29 September 2008

"Well, that’s because it really is seaweed…"

This line is very casual. It feels like it should be one of Ryuuji's thoughts. Are the internal thoughts of the characters distinctly marked in the original version?

"Eventually, she was clenching her teeth where her front teeth were visibly chattering,"

Not a clear sentence. she can't really clench and have her teeth chatter at the same time.

Akirasav 20:08, 28 September 2008 (PDT)

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