Talk:Toradora!:Volume5 Chapter1: Difference between revisions

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How long has Minori been playing?
 
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Mopped?
 
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''From Just'' is a fragment and should be '''From just now''', which makes no sense in this case, as it implies that she's only just joined the game, when she actually means from the beginning of the game.
''From Just'' is a fragment and should be '''From just now''', which makes no sense in this case, as it implies that she's only just joined the game, when she actually means from the beginning of the game.
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== Mopped? ==
Changed a couple of spelling errors, including mopped to mobbed.  Mopped means to wipe dry (as in mopped up), while mobbed means to be surrounded by a (large) group of people.


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Latest revision as of 04:40, 9 December 2008

From just I've been the only one that's been scoring!

Try > For all this time, I've been the only one scoring!

Or maybe > Since the start, I'm the only one that's been scoring!

From Just is a fragment and should be From just now, which makes no sense in this case, as it implies that she's only just joined the game, when she actually means from the beginning of the game.

JBV^_^

Mopped?[edit]

Changed a couple of spelling errors, including mopped to mobbed. Mopped means to wipe dry (as in mopped up), while mobbed means to be surrounded by a (large) group of people.

JBV^_^