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== Texte original ==
 
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   Tohsaka is right.
   Tohsaka is right.
   Saber drew Berserker away from here.
   Saber drew Berserker away from here.
   Then I should get away from this dangerous place and await Saber's return
   Then I should get away from this dangerous place and await Saber's return[line4]
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*page1|
   "Haa... Haa... Haa..."
   "Haa... Haa... Haa..."
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   ...Anyway, I desperately ran here.
   ...Anyway, I desperately ran here.
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   ""
   "[line8]"
   ...The living room is just as I left it.
   ...The living room is just as I left it.
   The air has been motionless ever since Lancer attacked and Tohsaka came here.
   The air has been motionless ever since Lancer attacked and Tohsaka came here.
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   No matter who won, I'm sure the battle is over now.
   No matter who won, I'm sure the battle is over now.
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   ""
   "[line8]"
   I should go back.
   I should go back.
   When I raise my head to turn the lights on and cheer myself up...
   When I raise my head to turn the lights on and cheer myself up...
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   I can tell there's someone in front of me, the one who stabbed my heart, but I can't see very clearly.
   I can tell there's someone in front of me, the one who stabbed my heart, but I can't see very clearly.
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   "      ?    ,    "
   "      [line3]?    ,    "
   The one in front of me sneers and tells me I am stupid.
   The one in front of me sneers and tells me I am stupid.
   The one in front of me is laughing that I have no way of surviving without my Servant.
   The one in front of me is laughing that I have no way of surviving without my Servant.
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   "Oh, ........"
   "Oh[line4], ........"
   ...That's right.
   ...That's right.
   Emiya Shirou will be killed the instant Saber is lost.
   Emiya Shirou will be killed the instant Saber is lost.
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   It doesn't matter if I'm in the house or if I run away somewhere.
   It doesn't matter if I'm in the house or if I run away somewhere.
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   "Guh"
   "G[line3]uh[line4]"
   ...My mind starts to fade.
   ...My mind starts to fade.
   I don't care who it is or what I got stabbed by.
   I don't care who it is or what I got stabbed by.
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   Because...
   Because...
   The instant my Command Spell lost its brightness, my life was lost as well
   The instant my Command Spell lost its brightness, my life was lost as well[line4]
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  • page0|&f.scripttitle
 Tohsaka is right.
 Saber drew Berserker away from here.
 Then I should get away from this dangerous place and await Saber's return[line4]
  • page1|
 "Haa... Haa... Haa..."
 I passed the bridge from Shinto and ran straight home.
 I never looked back as I ran.
 I don't know if I was scared of the unknown pursuer or if I felt guilty for leaving Saber behind.
 ...Anyway, I desperately ran here.
  • page2|
 "[line8]"
 ...The living room is just as I left it.
 The air has been motionless ever since Lancer attacked and Tohsaka came here.
 I go near the restored window.
 I find two small pieces of glass on the floor that Tohsaka must have overlooked.
  • page3|
 "...There's no crack in the glass... I wonder how Tohsaka made up for these pieces."
 I murmur to myself.
 ...I don't know why, but I don't feel like turning the lights on.
 I hide in the darkness as if to hide my weakness.
  • page4|
 "......"
 What I should be thinking about.
 What I should say.
 I'm running away from these things.
 ...The people that were here until a few hours ago.
 The people who were by my side until a few minutes ago.
 I have to ask myself if it was right to leave them behind, but I can't bring myself to get out of the dark.
  • page5|
 The wall clock points to three.
 ...It's been thirty minutes since then.
 No matter who won, I'm sure the battle is over now.
  • page6|
 "[line8]"
 I should go back.
 When I raise my head to turn the lights on and cheer myself up...
 A sharp pain runs through my left hand.
  • page7|
 "...The Command Spell...?"
 The color has faded from my Command Spell.
 Even though the shape is still there, the bright light that proves I am Saber's Master has disappeared.
 I understand instinctively what that means.
 "Saber...!"
 I follow my instinct and run out from the darkness.
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 I run outside.
 I won't make it now.
 I know I can't make it, but I start to run back...
 And I'm stabbed in the heart by some unknown thing.
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 "       ,        "
 ...I can't hear too well.
 I can tell there's someone in front of me, the one who stabbed my heart, but I can't see very clearly.
  • page10|
 "       [line3]?    ,     "
 The one in front of me sneers and tells me I am stupid.
 The one in front of me is laughing that I have no way of surviving without my Servant.
  • page11|
 "Oh[line4], ........"
 ...That's right.
 Emiya Shirou will be killed the instant Saber is lost.
 As I don't have a way to protect myself, I have no way to survive without Saber.
  • page12|
 But I didn't realize that, and I secluded myself.
 This is the result.
 It doesn't matter if I'm in the house or if I run away somewhere.
  • page13|
 "G[line3]uh[line4]"
 ...My mind starts to fade.
 I don't care who it is or what I got stabbed by.
 It doesn't matter if I die today or tomorrow.
  • page14|
 Because...
 The instant my Command Spell lost its brightness, my life was lost as well[line4]
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