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+ | [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-03.ks_english Anglais] |
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+ | == Memo Technique == |
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+ | == Notes du Traducteur == |
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== Texte == |
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− | "" |
+ | "[line8]" |
I know I won't be able to do anything even if I do go. |
I know I won't be able to do anything even if I do go. |
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− | But |
+ | But still[line4]I still feel her hand in mine. |
I told her we'll try our best. |
I told her we'll try our best. |
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She shook the hand I held out. |
She shook the hand I held out. |
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− | So |
+ | So[line4] |
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"Man, there's nothing else I can do...!!" |
"Man, there's nothing else I can do...!!" |
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My body is trembling from that fact, but I suppress it and run up the slope. |
My body is trembling from that fact, but I suppress it and run up the slope. |
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− | "Saber!" |
+ | "Saber[line4]!" |
I run into the open land. |
I run into the open land. |
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...And then. |
...And then. |
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Gravestones are flying around. |
Gravestones are flying around. |
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Every time the giant swings his sword, the heavy gravestones are split in two. |
Every time the giant swings his sword, the heavy gravestones are split in two. |
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− | In the midst of it... |
+ | [line3]In the midst of it... |
A knight bravely runs through the storm of gravestones. |
A knight bravely runs through the storm of gravestones. |
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The axe-sword rages around. |
The axe-sword rages around. |
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Gravestones are flung aside. |
Gravestones are flung aside. |
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− | In the chaos, Saber is fighting Berserker with the |
+ | In the chaos, Saber is fighting Berserker with the same[line3]no, with more power than before. |
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− | "" |
+ | "[line8]" |
− | "" |
+ | "[wacky len=9]" |
Their positions are reversed here. |
Their positions are reversed here. |
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The advantage belongs to someone with a small body like Saber. |
The advantage belongs to someone with a small body like Saber. |
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I'm sure that a hindrance of this degree is only trivial for Berserker. |
I'm sure that a hindrance of this degree is only trivial for Berserker. |
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But it's more than nothing. |
But it's more than nothing. |
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− | It's only a slight difference, but that slight difference is tipping the scale the other way now |
+ | It's only a slight difference, but that slight difference is tipping the scale the other way now[line3] |
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"This way...! You'll get hit if you're there!" |
"This way...! You'll get hit if you're there!" |
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She's really angry. |
She's really angry. |
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− | " |
+ | "Um[line3]I heard you. But I can't just run away, right?" |
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"What!? How could you reach that conclusion!? Can't you tell that you'll only be a bother to us since you can't fight!? It can't be helped if you die |
"What!? How could you reach that conclusion!? Can't you tell that you'll only be a bother to us since you can't fight!? It can't be helped if you die |
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trying to make a difference, but it'd be meaningless if you die doing nothing!" |
trying to make a difference, but it'd be meaningless if you die doing nothing!" |
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− | "?" |
+ | "[line4]?" |
...I don't know why, but Tohsaka is seriously angry. |
...I don't know why, but Tohsaka is seriously angry. |
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Even though I'm getting yelled at, I don't feel bad for some reason. |
Even though I'm getting yelled at, I don't feel bad for some reason. |
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− | "Hey, is that something you should get mad about? It shouldn't matter to you if I die meaninglessly or not." |
+ | "[line3]Hey, is that something you should get mad about? It shouldn't matter to you if I die meaninglessly or not." |
"It does matter! I told you I'd let you go for all of today, so it'll trouble me if you don't get home safely!" |
"It does matter! I told you I'd let you go for all of today, so it'll trouble me if you don't get home safely!" |
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Tohsaka sure had a different face on at school. |
Tohsaka sure had a different face on at school. |
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− | "Geez. Anyway, you're not hurt, so run away right now. |
+ | "[line3]Geez. Anyway, you're not hurt, so run away right now. |
That Ilyasviel girl intends to kill us all." |
That Ilyasviel girl intends to kill us all." |
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"That can't be true. There should be something I can do as long as I'm alive. And besides, are you going to ask someone to do something that you can't do?" |
"That can't be true. There should be something I can do as long as I'm alive. And besides, are you going to ask someone to do something that you can't do?" |
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− | "" |
+ | "[line8]" |
Tohsaka looks at me with a serious expression. |
Tohsaka looks at me with a serious expression. |
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"...You're right. I'm the shameless one for asking you to do something I can't do." |
"...You're right. I'm the shameless one for asking you to do something I can't do." |
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She looks away. |
She looks away. |
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− | "Well, I don't think there's a need to run away. I don't think Saber will lose now." |
+ | "[line3]Well, I don't think there's a need to run away. I don't think Saber will lose now." |
Tohsaka takes a peek from behind the tree. |
Tohsaka takes a peek from behind the tree. |
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She did it naturally, too. She got Berserker away from you, all the while she pretended to be cornered." |
She did it naturally, too. She got Berserker away from you, all the while she pretended to be cornered." |
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+ | "[line8]" |
...Then... |
...Then... |
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Saber must have determined that this place was a suitable battlefield when we were walking down the hill. |
Saber must have determined that this place was a suitable battlefield when we were walking down the hill. |
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But those words catch my attention. |
But those words catch my attention. |
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Archer isn't here. |
Archer isn't here. |
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− | If he really is an archer, he should not fight hand-to-hand, but |
+ | If he really is an archer, he should not fight hand-to-hand, but[line4] |
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− | "She got him!" |
+ | "She got him[line4]!" |
Tohsaka snaps her fingers. |
Tohsaka snaps her fingers. |
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Just as she said... Saber's sword must have hit Berserker, or he must have lost his footing. |
Just as she said... Saber's sword must have hit Berserker, or he must have lost his footing. |
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Berserker's body, holding firm until now, loses its balance. |
Berserker's body, holding firm until now, loses its balance. |
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+ | "[wacky len=9][line7]" |
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The beast lashes out desperately. |
The beast lashes out desperately. |
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Saber dodges it by jumping back, and holds her sword with both hands. |
Saber dodges it by jumping back, and holds her sword with both hands. |
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− | This is it. |
+ | [line4]This is it. |
As his desperate attack is dodged, Berserker loses his balance even more, |
As his desperate attack is dodged, Berserker loses his balance even more, |
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and Saber bends her knees to charge in with all her power. |
and Saber bends her knees to charge in with all her power. |
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Right then... |
Right then... |
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− | "Archer...? What do you mean, get away...?" |
+ | "[line4]Archer...? What do you mean, get away...?" |
I notice Tohsaka's confused voice, and sense an intent to kill aimed from a faraway place. |
I notice Tohsaka's confused voice, and sense an intent to kill aimed from a faraway place. |
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+ | "[line8]" |
Behind me. |
Behind me. |
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I see the knight in red standing on a rooftop hundreds of meters away, readying his bow. |
I see the knight in red standing on a rooftop hundreds of meters away, readying his bow. |
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+ | "[line8]" |
It's either nausea or a chill. |
It's either nausea or a chill. |
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He's readying a bow. |
He's readying a bow. |
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A bow that's no different from before. |
A bow that's no different from before. |
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It cannot even scratch Berserker, even with a direct hit. |
It cannot even scratch Berserker, even with a direct hit. |
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− | So there is no need to feel any threat from it |
+ | So there is no need to feel any threat from it[line4] |
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− | "" |
+ | "[line8]" |
− | I feel a chill. |
+ | [line3]I feel a chill. |
What he is readying in his bow is not an "arrow", but something completely different. |
What he is readying in his bow is not an "arrow", but something completely different. |
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And his intent to kill isn't just directed at Berserker. |
And his intent to kill isn't just directed at Berserker. |
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− | "Sab" |
+ | "Sab[line4]" |
I act instantly. |
I act instantly. |
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− | I |
+ | I[line3] |
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Revision as of 05:21, 26 March 2009
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Texte original
Memo Technique
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- page0|&f.scripttitle
"[line8]" I know I won't be able to do anything even if I do go. But still[line4]I still feel her hand in mine. I told her we'll try our best. She shook the hand I held out. So[line4]
- page1|
"Man, there's nothing else I can do...!!" I'll be killed if I go up the hill after that giant. My body is trembling from that fact, but I suppress it and run up the slope.
- page2|
"Saber[line4]!" I run into the open land. ...And then. The scenery that awaits me there is totally unexpected.
- page3|
Gravestones are flying around. Every time the giant swings his sword, the heavy gravestones are split in two. [line3]In the midst of it... A knight bravely runs through the storm of gravestones.
- page4|
The axe-sword rages around. Gravestones are flung aside. In the chaos, Saber is fighting Berserker with the same[line3]no, with more power than before.
- page5|
"[line8]" "[wacky len=9]" Their positions are reversed here. The advantage belongs to someone with a small body like Saber. Berserker is hindered by obstacles, and Saber acts as if there's nothing in her way.
- page6|
I'm sure that a hindrance of this degree is only trivial for Berserker. But it's more than nothing. It's only a slight difference, but that slight difference is tipping the scale the other way now[line3]
- page7|
"This way...! You'll get hit if you're there!" "Huh!? Whoa...!?" "What are you thinking!? I told you to run away, right!? Or did you not hear me!?" She's really angry.
- page8|
"Um[line3]I heard you. But I can't just run away, right?"
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"What!? How could you reach that conclusion!? Can't you tell that you'll only be a bother to us since you can't fight!? It can't be helped if you die trying to make a difference, but it'd be meaningless if you die doing nothing!"
- page10|
"[line4]?" ...I don't know why, but Tohsaka is seriously angry. Even though I'm getting yelled at, I don't feel bad for some reason.
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"[line3]Hey, is that something you should get mad about? It shouldn't matter to you if I die meaninglessly or not." "It does matter! I told you I'd let you go for all of today, so it'll trouble me if you don't get home safely!"
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"......" ...I'm confused even more now. Tohsaka sure had a different face on at school.
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"[line3]Geez. Anyway, you're not hurt, so run away right now. That Ilyasviel girl intends to kill us all."
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"I know that. But I can't run away. Saber's fighting, so I can't run away by myself."
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"...That's a line for someone who can make a difference. You'll just die a meaningless death, as you can't do anything to support her. This is your last warning. Just run away." "That can't be true. There should be something I can do as long as I'm alive. And besides, are you going to ask someone to do something that you can't do?"
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"[line8]" Tohsaka looks at me with a serious expression. "...You're right. I'm the shameless one for asking you to do something I can't do."
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She looks away. "[line3]Well, I don't think there's a need to run away. I don't think Saber will lose now." Tohsaka takes a peek from behind the tree.
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Their battle is continuing without change. Berserker's attacks smash through empty space and only destroy his surroundings.
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Between the attacks... Within the swirling whirlwind and flying clods... Within the rain of broken gravestones... Saber rushes in without even dirtying her armor and attacks Berserker.
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"......" It is a divine work of utmost excellence. My fear has disappeared, seeing this battle that is totally impossible for mere humans. Instead, I am fascinated.
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I could not believe I was in this Holy Grail War thing, and I also had some uneasiness. But all of it is blown away when I see her.
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Dancing swords. Within the whirlwind of fatal destruction, the knight challenges the enemy without hesitation.
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...Maybe this scene made me accept everything. No matter what may fall upon us in the future... I'm convinced that I will be able to match even a fierce god if I have Saber with me.
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"...I thought so. It was strange, but she blocked Berserker's sword on purpose." Tohsaka murmurs without emotion.
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"...Was that to lure Berserker here?" "Yup. It's suicidal to fight Berserker in a place without cover. That's why Saber chose this place as the battleground. She did it naturally, too. She got Berserker away from you, all the while she pretended to be cornered."
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"[line8]" ...Then... Saber must have determined that this place was a suitable battlefield when we were walking down the hill.
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"But you can't expect backup in a battle like this. Our enemy is a monster that even nullifies Archer's arrows. Backup was meaningless from the start." Tohsaka murmurs as she watches the battle between Saber and Berserker.
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"...Archer's arrows..." But those words catch my attention. Archer isn't here. If he really is an archer, he should not fight hand-to-hand, but[line4]
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"She got him[line4]!" Tohsaka snaps her fingers. Just as she said... Saber's sword must have hit Berserker, or he must have lost his footing. Berserker's body, holding firm until now, loses its balance.
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"[wacky len=9][line7]" The beast lashes out desperately. Saber dodges it by jumping back, and holds her sword with both hands.
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[line4]This is it. As his desperate attack is dodged, Berserker loses his balance even more, and Saber bends her knees to charge in with all her power.
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Right then... "[line4]Archer...? What do you mean, get away...?" I notice Tohsaka's confused voice, and sense an intent to kill aimed from a faraway place.
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"[line8]" Behind me. I see the knight in red standing on a rooftop hundreds of meters away, readying his bow.
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"[line8]" It's either nausea or a chill. He's readying a bow. A bow that's no different from before. It cannot even scratch Berserker, even with a direct hit. So there is no need to feel any threat from it[line4]
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"[line8]" [line3]I feel a chill. What he is readying in his bow is not an "arrow", but something completely different. And his intent to kill isn't just directed at Berserker.
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"Sab[line4]" I act instantly. I[line3]
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