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*page0|&f.scripttitle | *page0|&f.scripttitle | ||
"Saber!!!" | "Saber[line4]!!!" | ||
Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover. | Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover. | ||
*page1| | *page1| | ||
"Hey, hold on!" | "Hey, hold on[line4]!" | ||
I run at full speed towards Saber. | I run at full speed towards Saber. | ||
"Shirou?" | "Shirou[line4]?" | ||
She looks dumbfounded. | She looks dumbfounded. | ||
Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker. | Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker. | ||
*page2| | *page2| | ||
I can make it! | I can make it[line4]! | ||
I can feel the danger coming up behind me. | I can feel the danger coming up behind me. | ||
"W-Why did you come out...!?" | "W-Why did you come out...!?" | ||
I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm! | I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm[line4]! | ||
*page3| | *page3| | ||
"Are you insane, Master...!?" | "Are you insane, Master...!?" | ||
"We'll talk later! Just come this way" | "We'll talk later! Just come this way[line4]" | ||
I grab Saber in my arms and jump away. | I grab Saber in my arms and jump away. | ||
*page4| | *page4| | ||
The "arrow" is released. | [line4]The "arrow" is released. | ||
Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far. | Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far. | ||
The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking. | The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking. | ||
But at that moment... | But at that moment... | ||
*page5| | *page5| | ||
"" | "[wacky len=15]" | ||
The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might | The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might[line4] | ||
*page6| | *page6| | ||
In that instant... | [line4]In that instant... | ||
All sound is lost. | All sound is lost. | ||
*page7| | *page7| | ||
"!" | "[line8]!" | ||
I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself. | I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself. | ||
Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything. | Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything. | ||
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I manage to survive the destruction. | I manage to survive the destruction. | ||
*page9| | *page9| | ||
"Wha" | "Wha[line4]" | ||
Saber is staring in astonishment. | Saber is staring in astonishment. | ||
...I'm doing the same as well. | ...I'm doing the same as well. | ||
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But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition. | But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition. | ||
*page10| | *page10| | ||
"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm" | "Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm[line4]" | ||
Saber's voice is weak. | Saber's voice is weak. | ||
Sparks are flying through the night air. | Sparks are flying through the night air. | ||
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...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile. | ...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile. | ||
*page13| | *page13| | ||
"" | "[line8]" | ||
I don't know why it catches my attention so much. | I don't know why it catches my attention so much. | ||
The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire. | The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire. | ||
It fades away like candy melting under heat. | It fades away like candy melting under heat. | ||
*page14| | *page14| | ||
It | It[line4] | ||
Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason. | [line4]Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason. | ||
*page15| | *page15| | ||
"Shirou, that was..." | "[line4]Shirou, that was..." | ||
"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it." | "It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it." | ||
I raise my head to look at the distant Archer. | I raise my head to look at the distant Archer. | ||
*page16| | *page16| | ||
"!" | "[line8]!" | ||
I shouldn't be able to see him. | I shouldn't be able to see him. | ||
I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do. | I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do. | ||
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He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker. | He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker. | ||
*page17| | *page17| | ||
"Damn him!" | "Damn him[line4]!" | ||
I feel a headache. | I feel a headache. | ||
The chill running down my back won't go away. | The chill running down my back won't go away. | ||
My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit | My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit[line4] | ||
*page18| | *page18| | ||
"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good." | "...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good." | ||
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The giant starts to retreat through the fire. | The giant starts to retreat through the fire. | ||
*page20| | *page20| | ||
"What? You're running away after all this?" | "[line3]What? You're running away after all this?" | ||
"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer." | "Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer." | ||
*page21| | *page21| | ||
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...I hear Saber's calm voice. | ...I hear Saber's calm voice. | ||
*page24| | *page24| | ||
" | "Oh[line4]Yeah, sorry about that." | ||
I manage to answer despite my throbbing head. | I manage to answer despite my throbbing head. | ||
I let Saber go, and when I stand up... | I let Saber go, and when I stand up... | ||
I fall on my butt. | I fall on my butt. | ||
*page25| | *page25| | ||
"Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel | "Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel well[line4]Shirou, your back...!" | ||
Saber sounds tense. | Saber sounds tense. | ||
...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache. | ...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache. | ||
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Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back. | Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back. | ||
*page28| | *page28| | ||
" | "Ou[line4]You're rough[line4]" | ||
I try to control my breathing. | I try to control my breathing. | ||
...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur. | ...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur. | ||
I can manage this pain. | I can manage this pain. | ||
*page29| | *page29| | ||
" | "Haa[line4]Haa, haa[line4]" | ||
But this felt especially bad. | But this felt especially bad. | ||
If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like. | If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like. | ||
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Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her. | Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her. | ||
*page34| | *page34| | ||
"" | "[line8]" | ||
When I plant a foot to follow after her... | When I plant a foot to follow after her... | ||
My vision suddenly goes white. | My vision suddenly goes white. | ||
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But the feeling fades as all my senses go away. | But the feeling fades as all my senses go away. | ||
*page36| | *page36| | ||
What's left is this throbbing within me. | [line4]What's left is this throbbing within me. | ||
What's irritating me? | What's irritating me? | ||
And what am I so concerned about? | And what am I so concerned about? | ||
...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb. | ...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb. | ||
*page37| | *page37| |
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- page0|&f.scripttitle
"Saber[line4]!!!" Before I realize it, I'm running out from my cover.
- page1|
"Hey, hold on[line4]!" I run at full speed towards Saber. "Shirou[line4]?" She looks dumbfounded. Saber sees me and stops her attack on Berserker.
- page2|
I can make it[line4]! I can feel the danger coming up behind me. "W-Why did you come out...!?" I ignore her, run to her at full speed, and grab her arm[line4]!
- page3|
"Are you insane, Master...!?" "We'll talk later! Just come this way[line4]" I grab Saber in my arms and jump away.
- page4|
[line4]The "arrow" is released. Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far. The black giant ignores it, as if saying it is not worth blocking. But at that moment...
- page5|
"[wacky len=15]" The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might[line4]
- page6|
[line4]In that instant... All sound is lost.
- page7|
"[line8]!" I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself. Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything. All I can feel is the heat burning my skin and the shaking of the ground. Many things go flying through the air, and a piece of something pierces my back.
- page8|
"......!" I grit my teeth and endure it. The blinding light must have only lasted for an instant. I manage to survive the destruction.
- page9|
"Wha[line4]" Saber is staring in astonishment. ...I'm doing the same as well. I don't know what happened. Archer's "arrow" razed this cemetery in an instant. There is a crater at the center of the explosion. Archer has created this destruction. But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.
- page10|
"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm[line4]" Saber's voice is weak. Sparks are flying through the night air. The black giant is standing still in the fire, and everybody here watches this terrible spectacle without words.
- page11|
The crackling of the flames is the only sound present. Right when I start to think that this might turn into a big fire... "Huh...?" Something rolls towards me with a noise.
- page12|
"...A sword?" No, it is an "arrow". An arrow with a gorgeous hilt and a spiral blade. ...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.
- page13|
"[line8]" I don't know why it catches my attention so much. The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire. It fades away like candy melting under heat.
- page14|
It[line4] [line4]Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.
- page15|
"[line4]Shirou, that was..." "It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it." I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.
- page16|
"[line8]!" I shouldn't be able to see him. I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do. He's smiling. He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.
- page17|
"Damn him[line4]!" I feel a headache. The chill running down my back won't go away. My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit[line4]
- page18|
"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good." The girl's cheerful voice echoes through the air.
- page19|
"All right, come back, Berserker. I wanted to get the boring stuff over with first, but I've changed my mind." ...The black shadow wavers. The giant starts to retreat through the fire.
- page20|
"[line3]What? You're running away after all this?" "Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."
- page21|
The giant disappears. The girl giggles. "Goodbye. Let's play again, Onii-chan." Saying this, she goes away.
- page22|
"......" The unexpected disaster leaves. Tohsaka must not intend to follow that girl in spite of what she said. Even I can tell that the girl let us go. So I don't think Tohsaka will go and seek out such a reckless fight.
- page23|
"Master. I thank you for saving me. But can you let go of me now?" ...I hear Saber's calm voice.
- page24|
"Oh[line4]Yeah, sorry about that." I manage to answer despite my throbbing head. I let Saber go, and when I stand up... I fall on my butt.
- page25|
"Shirou? What is wrong? Do you not feel well[line4]Shirou, your back...!" Saber sounds tense. ...I can't see Saber's face, probably because of my pounding headache. Saber supports me and puts her hand behind my back.
- page26|
"Ouch." I feel a sharp pain. ...Even though it's not as strong as my headache, there's a sharp pain running through my back.
- page27|
"...This is terrible. It is dangerous like this. Please hold still while I remove this piece." "Huh? What do you mean by that...?" ......! She doesn't hesitate. Saber forcefully pulls something out of my back.
- page28|
"Ou[line4]You're rough[line4]" I try to control my breathing. ...I'm a magus, even though I may be an amateur. I can manage this pain.
- page29|
"Haa[line4]Haa, haa[line4]" But this felt especially bad. If I had a wing on my back and it was pulled out, I'm sure that's what it would feel like.
- page30|
"Your wound is healing... I see, you had a way to heal yourself." Sighing with relief, Saber says something strange.
- page31|
"...?" A way to heal myself? I shouldn't be able to use such difficult magic.
- page32|
"Are you all right, Emiya-kun?" ...Tohsaka comes to us. I raise my hand to tell her I'm all right.
- page33|
"I see. Then let's go. People might come here with all the commotion we've caused." Tohsaka runs out of the cemetery, her long hair fluttering behind her.
- page34|
"[line8]" When I plant a foot to follow after her... My vision suddenly goes white.
- page35|
"Master...!?" ...I feel someone support me as I start to fall. But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.
- page36|
[line4]What's left is this throbbing within me. What's irritating me? And what am I so concerned about? ...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb.
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